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Basic Steps
Strip
Lay
Look
Touch
Explore
Kiss
Feel
Rub
Lick
Combine
Motion
Gasp
Clean
Pee
Hydrate
Hug
Spoon
Dream
Lay
Look
Touch
Explore
Kiss
Feel
Rub
Lick
Combine
Motion
Gasp
Clean
Pee
Hydrate
Hug
Spoon
Dream
Published 20th Dec 2018
Author's Note
Why make it complicated?
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2018 2:26pm
I love uncomplicated! Big thumbs up from me.
20th Dec 2018 5:22pm
5th Jan 2019 12:08pm
you don't leave a finger
so none will linger
ur an angler
great young one word beginner
good sexy teacher read again's if u haven't
so none will linger
ur an angler
great young one word beginner
good sexy teacher read again's if u haven't
5th Jan 2019 7:56pm
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11th Jan 2019 10:20pm
It's like straightforward instruction, one word per line. Very clever, fine work. And, like you say in your notes, complexity is to be avoided.
11th Jan 2019 11:31pm
24th Jan 2019 9:40pm
This makes me giggle. You summed up the act to a T in so few words of truth.
25th Jan 2019 00:12am
Just in case they charge me by the word! : )
Thanks for your comment. Glad I brought you some joy.
Thanks for your comment. Glad I brought you some joy.
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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