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Sunshine On Melancholy
Although the dark clouds of a harsh winter and my ominous forces hover and loom; Still, do I seek the embers of the sun to replace my existence of somber with solace Trading my foreboding thoughts as the feeling of uncertainty plays; Like a flower sprouting through trodden soil, growing to face the world in full bloom Hope and change is all that I will now and forever acknowledge;
As it's warmth and shine dawns to kiss my face on darkened days
As it's warmth and shine dawns to kiss my face on darkened days
Published 23rd Jan 2019
| Edited 17th Feb 2019
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23rd Jan 2019 1:33am
Beautiful depth of open feelings, hope and looking in towards one self. 💐Imagery was exquisite and touching of one's heart.🌹
Loved it dear Pandora...😁
Wolfman🐺
Loved it dear Pandora...😁
Wolfman🐺
23rd Jan 2019 2:40am
Thank you, dear Wolfman. I'm trying my best to be a better person; inside and out and especially trying to find that inner peace in spite of the rough things. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
23rd Jan 2019 10:45pm
You are very heartfelt welcome dear Pandora. I loved your ink.😁
You are a very beautiful and caring person inside and out🌹
You will find that inner peace dear, this know for you are a very strong woman, and very intelligent.🌷
Praying for you always to find your plateau of peace and tranquility.🙏
Wolfman🐺
You are a very beautiful and caring person inside and out🌹
You will find that inner peace dear, this know for you are a very strong woman, and very intelligent.🌷
Praying for you always to find your plateau of peace and tranquility.🙏
Wolfman🐺
23rd Jan 2019 2:05am
to find one's self in very hard to do
this read shows that not so ture
brilliant write Pandora
this read shows that not so ture
brilliant write Pandora
23rd Jan 2019 2:43am
Thank you, nutbuster ! I'm on a journey to not only find myself , but save myself from the negativity we all so easily see instead of the good.
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2019 3:12am
Pandora,
Don't ever let anyone question your writing ability, that's a beautiful vision of your growth through the backdrop of nature.
Brilliant write, beautiful girl.
Love,
Matthew.
Don't ever let anyone question your writing ability, that's a beautiful vision of your growth through the backdrop of nature.
Brilliant write, beautiful girl.
Love,
Matthew.
23rd Jan 2019 4:29am
Thank you, Matthew. You always make me smile. I'm so grateful for you, sweet friend. Big hugs!!
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2019 6:33am
It's a pleasure, you're a wonderful writer, and so appreciative. It's so nice.
Hugs right back.
Matthew.
Hugs right back.
Matthew.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
23rd Jan 2019 10:13am
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23rd Jan 2019 7:27pm
I was hoping it would "shine " through Danny. It's my goal to be a completely different person by 40, loving and accepting of my flaws, trials and at peace with mistakes. I'm growing!! Thanks for the endearing comment.
23rd Jan 2019 10:48pm
23rd Jan 2019 11:33pm
Thank you, NewBeginnings. It's nice to see you and your lovely comment.
