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Will Anyone Cry?
I'm so wired
That I can hardly see
All because I took these pills
So I don't have to sleep
I take more each day
And let it rule my head
If I keep taking them
Maybe I'll be dead
Laying here in my room
Thinking of suicide
And wondering if I'll be missed
Or if anyone will cry.
That I can hardly see
All because I took these pills
So I don't have to sleep
I take more each day
And let it rule my head
If I keep taking them
Maybe I'll be dead
Laying here in my room
Thinking of suicide
And wondering if I'll be missed
Or if anyone will cry.
Published 16th Nov 2011
| Edited 18th Nov 2011
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16th Nov 2011 11:03pm
if someone will miss us when we are gone, is something that I usually do. Life just seems so pointless at times...simple but the message is there. Chey, good one.
17th Nov 2011 11:31pm
now days seems like we hardly have control anymore. suicide seems so easy almost to simple when will it happen for some of us . plx
18th Nov 2011 1:07pm
Your poem is beautiful and touching, but sends warning signs through my head. Please don't commit suicide. You have my number, use it. :)
18th Nov 2011 1:20pm
