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A Banquet for the Birds
A brisk breeze blows;
Buckeye branches bow
Beneath the beautiful, blue sky.
Behold!
Blackberry brambles
Bursting with berries,
Bring bountiful banquets for the birds.
Blue Jays and blackbirds
Break berries beneath their bold bills,
A ferocious feeding frenzy
Before the famine of first frost.
A curious cardinal creeps ever closer,
Keeping careful consideration of the crows;
Fearful, but finally finding his favorite fix
In a fervent flurry of feathers.
'Bzzzzzz'
A bee buzzes by,
Busy as can be.
As butterflies brush against
Brilliant bouquets of
Buttonbush blossoms,
Blooming
Before my eyes.
Buckeye branches bow
Beneath the beautiful, blue sky.
Behold!
Blackberry brambles
Bursting with berries,
Bring bountiful banquets for the birds.
Blue Jays and blackbirds
Break berries beneath their bold bills,
A ferocious feeding frenzy
Before the famine of first frost.
A curious cardinal creeps ever closer,
Keeping careful consideration of the crows;
Fearful, but finally finding his favorite fix
In a fervent flurry of feathers.
'Bzzzzzz'
A bee buzzes by,
Busy as can be.
As butterflies brush against
Brilliant bouquets of
Buttonbush blossoms,
Blooming
Before my eyes.
Author's Note
This poem started off as me practicing alliteration with the letter 'B', and developed into this. At risk of being redundant, or losing the readers interest, I threw the c's and f's in there to make it a little more interesting (not to mention, I was running out of good B words). This one is a little more lighthearted and playful than my usual writes, so I hope you guys still enjoy it! I considered italicizing the poem to add a more elegant appearance, but decided against it for increased legibility.
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Re. A Banquet for the Birds
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 10:36pm
NewB,
You get better and better, my friend. I loved that. Alliteration awesomely accomplished!
Love your writing.
MZ.
You get better and better, my friend. I loved that. Alliteration awesomely accomplished!
Love your writing.
MZ.
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 00:12am
Matthew, thanks so much, man! What started as playful alliteration practice blossomed into something more tangible, and that is what you see here. Your kind words are inspiring, so thanks for that! So glad that you enjoyed it!
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2019 00:17am
You're welcome, and you're really a great writer, my friend, honestly.
Keep it up.
MZ.
Keep it up.
MZ.
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 1:24am
I will try. When I'm inspired, the poems flow naturally, but there's times when I can hardly write a decent sentence. Thanks so much for the flattery!
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2019 4:29am
Hey NewB,
I know exactly how you feel, my friend. Same thing for me. Hopefully you'll have continued inspiration. You're a good guy.
TTYS,
MZ.
I know exactly how you feel, my friend. Same thing for me. Hopefully you'll have continued inspiration. You're a good guy.
TTYS,
MZ.
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 00:14am
Thank you, Dan. That was my intent, although not initially. I appreciate your feedback and that you took the time to read this, and I'm glad you weren't disappointed!
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22nd Jan 2019 00:15am
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Sweet. Thanks so much for dropping in again! :)
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22nd Jan 2019 3:49am
That is the theme of many of my poems, and one of my greatest inspirations...
Thank you for your uplifting comment :)
Thank you for your uplifting comment :)
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22nd Jan 2019 9:40am
NewBeginnings..You have caught the frenzy of autumn the urgency is exciting Kexby
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 7:07pm
Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
Thanks for your comment, Kexby!
Thanks for your comment, Kexby!
Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 4:44pm
Just lovely, and also a great example of alliteration and imagery. I can hear and see the birds and forest in my head.
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22nd Jan 2019 7:08pm
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 9:19pm
Thanks so much for your time and your wonderful compliment. I am honored by the fact that you reading listed it too, it means a lot to me!
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Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2019 11:52pm
This is brilliant work! I love alliteration, and you have used it very cleverly here :)
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 00:11am
Aww, thanks, Velvet. I don't really know if it's brilliant, but I'm glad that you think so! Thanks for the wonderful comment :)
Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 00:22am
Wonderful B alliteration throughout! Those final lines were gorgeous imagery to finish up with.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 00:31am
Thanks for the great feedback, Ahavati :). This one actually isn't for a competition, though. The B competition was a little too specific for me (requiring the use of words that I don't generally use), so I didn't write one for it, but wrote this instead.
Thanks again for stopping by!
Thanks again for stopping by!
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 4:07am
:) I hope the painting was nice. I'd love to see what your mind came up with. Thanks so much for stopping by again!
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Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 2:06pm
This was lovely and you painted a nice scene with your words. Great job...xo
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 2:18pm
Thank you for your lovely compliments, Mysteria. I was really just having fun with this one. I'm really glad that others have enjoyed reading it so much :)
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
23rd Jan 2019 8:42pm
Thanks Orenda, for the feedback and the reading list entry! I'm ecstatic that so many people are connecting with this one. I'm happy that I decided to share it here for everyone else to enjoy! :)
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Re: Re. A Banquet for the Birds
14th Jan 2020 9:35am
Thank you so, so much for your wonderful comment. This poem is fairly neglected nowadays, so I'm glad that you rediscovered it :)
You're a sweet soul, mystical! ❤️😊
You're a sweet soul, mystical! ❤️😊
Re. A Banquet for the Birds
22nd Jan 2020 6:25pm
This is brilliant how you used the buzzing bee to come back to the b words!
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