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Here Comes Your Torment
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Here comes your torment slowly down the steps:
Black corset, garter belt, stiletto heels.
The mental dungeon where I’ll wash and prep,
Adjusting stirrups best for how it feels.
With latex hood you’ll never see a thing;
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps.
Imagination might outrun the sting,
But heaven help when I apply the clips.
Until I do, I’ll lay out all the strips
Across a table for each instrument.
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps,
Who’s expert with syringe and speculum.
From speakers mounted high, a little sax,
A baby ‘spot’ to emphasize my hips.
I pull on latex gloves, optimum max,
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps.
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps:
Black corset, garter belt, stiletto heels.
The mental dungeon where I’ll wash and prep,
Adjusting stirrups best for how it feels.
With latex hood you’ll never see a thing;
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps.
Imagination might outrun the sting,
But heaven help when I apply the clips.
Until I do, I’ll lay out all the strips
Across a table for each instrument.
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps,
Who’s expert with syringe and speculum.
From speakers mounted high, a little sax,
A baby ‘spot’ to emphasize my hips.
I pull on latex gloves, optimum max,
Here comes your torment slowly down the steps.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
16th Jan 2019 9:59pm
This would definitely be a torture for me as I can't even allow the bed covers to cover my feet when i sleep at night ------- it's a claustrophobic thing.
Love, Love, Love this spill though :)
Love, Love, Love this spill though :)
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16th Jan 2019 10:09pm
Aah thank you, Tallen, my friend! Mmm, yes, it takes a special ability in the mind of a person into these kind of kinks. But just as you’ve expressed, you can be titillated to distraction even if the sight of such willing confinement gives you the shakes. Such delight, your comment. x
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
16th Jan 2019 10:06pm
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16th Jan 2019 10:13pm
Why thank you, poet, my dungeon is equipped with every horror, for your (and my) pleasure.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
16th Jan 2019 10:41pm
Hot and erotic prelude. The syringe would scare me......and I'm sure I wouldn't be a fan of the speculum.
Well done capturing the "mind games" of the bondage anticipation.
Well done capturing the "mind games" of the bondage anticipation.
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Re: Re. Here Comes Your Torment
Why thank you, DaVinci.
And what I know very well of such mind games is expressed in this poem as a mere tip of the iceberg.
Must observe some of the mystique...
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And what I know very well of such mind games is expressed in this poem as a mere tip of the iceberg.
Must observe some of the mystique...
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
16th Jan 2019 11:34pm
Sensuality is experienced outward by our physicality in terms of the five standard senses, but it takes a subtlety of awareness to express it's beginnings, deepest roots and flowerings in the inner erogenous demesne of the mind and how these details of dress and other trappings heighten pleasure, as does the intimacy of dominance and surrender.
You execute this translation into the qualia vocabulary with skill and ability.
Daniel
You execute this translation into the qualia vocabulary with skill and ability.
Daniel
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Re: Re. Here Comes Your Torment
Thank you, Daniel. Not many would express their reaction with anything nearly as sophisticated as this, which is utterly, utterly quite the honor.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
17th Jan 2019 00:47am
Very entrancing! I really enjoyed how descriptive you were with your words. Imagination felt deep.
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Re: Re. Here Comes Your Torment
18th Jan 2019 10:57am
Why thank you kindly, sister Red, I’m over the moon, and honored for the RL.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
17th Jan 2019 1:09am
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18th Jan 2019 11:01am
Ah, yes, dear SweetO, an acquired taste to be sure.
And I thank you, yes I’m your girl, cause I’ve got just the syringe to do the injecting.
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And I thank you, yes I’m your girl, cause I’ve got just the syringe to do the injecting.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
17th Jan 2019 8:52am
Just wondering what you are going to do with the syringe? Though I have a vivid imagination.
Excellent write Jade. You appear to cater for all fetishes.
Dark Sun.😁
Excellent write Jade. You appear to cater for all fetishes.
Dark Sun.😁
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Re: Re. Here Comes Your Torment
18th Jan 2019 11:11am
Thanks for dropping into the dungeon, Sun. And yes, I figured this would be your cuppa tea.
Ah yes, well, ahem, I have just the image that shows where the syringe was headed, but the Mods would nevah stand for it. Better luck next time, eh?
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Ah yes, well, ahem, I have just the image that shows where the syringe was headed, but the Mods would nevah stand for it. Better luck next time, eh?
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18th Jan 2019 11:17am
Heheh! Thank you! A veritable sonic boom I heard, my tomcat! Wooo *starts to teeter*
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
19th Jan 2019 10:48pm
I almost look forward to the torment. Could do without the latex hood, but that's strictly up to you. Personally, I'd like to see every sinuous move you make. A quatern delight!
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Re: Re. Here Comes Your Torment
19th Jan 2019 11:04pm
Why thank you, mightily, dear crowfly friend. No worries, if latex’s not your bag, I’m versatile, and can even throw in an extra kink for free.
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Re. Here Comes Your Torment
21st Jan 2019 4:06pm
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Why thank you so much, dear Mysteria of the Pen... and warm greetings to welcome you to the Deep. xo
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