PASSIONFRUIT

There's an idealogical realism to this

Thanks. The satisfaction of sex and writing poetry are in some ways interchangeable to me.

Excellent write Kumar!👏 i dig

Thank you Hunter of Truth

I love the brevity of this, Kumar.  It says a lot in so few lines.  If I may suggest one change:

Yeild of lines vs fruit.  Seems it all yields poetry.  

I like what you are saying. I kind of like "Field of lines" too. Hmm. Will have to think about...

Short poems always interesting to read. Nice write.

Thanks Inker!

Short but gets the point across very well

Thank you! Really enjoyed reading your comments on this and other poems.