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Last Breath
A single minute left
A breath to spare
Gazing at the abyss
I was lost
Far from my fellows
Far from my beloved
Less than a minute left
A thought to spare
Thinking death would come, I was ready
But the lingering regrets, I was not
Half-minute left
A move to spare
Requesting help from nowhere
I feared, I cried, I'm about to die
Less than a minute left
A thought to spare
My strength demise
My heart aches
Losing hope, losing faith
I gave up
Last 10 seconds left
Memories flooded
Emotions breached
Tick, tock, tick, tock
The clock went off
A breath to spare
Gazing at the abyss
I was lost
Far from my fellows
Far from my beloved
Less than a minute left
A thought to spare
Thinking death would come, I was ready
But the lingering regrets, I was not
Half-minute left
A move to spare
Requesting help from nowhere
I feared, I cried, I'm about to die
Less than a minute left
A thought to spare
My strength demise
My heart aches
Losing hope, losing faith
I gave up
Last 10 seconds left
Memories flooded
Emotions breached
Tick, tock, tick, tock
The clock went off
Published 10th Jan 2019
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10th Jan 2019 2:45pm
10th Jan 2019 10:21pm
I wanted to themed it as astronomy (and take gambles if you figured it or not)
10th Jan 2019 6:18pm
Excellent piece! A thrilling kind of write
with an interesting evocative flow and message
I dig ya!👏
with an interesting evocative flow and message
I dig ya!👏
10th Jan 2019 8:32pm
I give you my thanks from my eternal darkness. (it made me motivate to make more XD)
