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9th Jan 2019 1:00pm
Excellent write! Great flow and structure
I love the ending
"Status
of such ones requires constant sin
the self righteous never want the antidote for sin
Slavish evil is the counterfeit wealth of the infamous"
So true powerfully said
Great piece!
I love the ending
"Status
of such ones requires constant sin
the self righteous never want the antidote for sin
Slavish evil is the counterfeit wealth of the infamous"
So true powerfully said
Great piece!
9th Jan 2019 3:01pm
9th Jan 2019 2:13pm
9th Jan 2019 3:00pm
Thank you, SnuggleBuck.
That is the teaching of many a church. But look at the infants. They are not sinners. The Bible says you must know to do good and not do it, because that is sin. So young children cannot.
That is the teaching of many a church. But look at the infants. They are not sinners. The Bible says you must know to do good and not do it, because that is sin. So young children cannot.
Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 3:29pm
Edible One,
Very deep, and profound.
Love the way you make us think.
Great write, EW.
Matthew.
Very deep, and profound.
Love the way you make us think.
Great write, EW.
Matthew.
23rd Jan 2019 5:40pm
23rd Jan 2019 4:41am
I don't write in this genre, but I very well appreciate your emotion, imagery and TRUTH spoken!! It all flowed so smoothly too.
23rd Jan 2019 5:39pm
Wow, high marks for this one, thank you! I'm so grateful for the feedback!
23rd Jan 2019 7:06pm
24th Jan 2019 3:24am
24th Jan 2019 3:57am
No, you have to be a paid member and do so yourself. I was just implying it should be is all.
24th Jan 2019 5:58am
Oh, ok, lol! One fine day I shall probably get that membership and thank you again.
