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Oh, Bats!
I'm so deep in this now...
Like a girl in a bat cave
Will she grow or escape?
Either way she finds
her hands on a big torch
ready to light up some asses
chirping and shitting down at her
Reaching for a spark
from deep within her muse
Rage against the dark
finds her lighting up the fuse
What she doesn't know...
The shit she's buried in
is explosive overflow
of methane sin
to fertilize apocalypse
firing her cannons from her ships
which leaves her sinking
in the fodder of evidence
this dark trap stinking
Like a girl in a bat cave
Will she grow or escape?
Either way she finds
her hands on a big torch
ready to light up some asses
chirping and shitting down at her
Reaching for a spark
from deep within her muse
Rage against the dark
finds her lighting up the fuse
What she doesn't know...
The shit she's buried in
is explosive overflow
of methane sin
to fertilize apocalypse
firing her cannons from her ships
which leaves her sinking
in the fodder of evidence
this dark trap stinking
Published 7th Jan 2019
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7th Jan 2019 2:44am
Great penning! Interesting in depth piece loved it👏👏
Like a girl in a bat cave
Will she grow or escape?
Either way she finds
her hands on a big torch
ready to light up some asses
chirping and shitting down at her
Loved this verse well done!
Like a girl in a bat cave
Will she grow or escape?
Either way she finds
her hands on a big torch
ready to light up some asses
chirping and shitting down at her
Loved this verse well done!
7th Jan 2019 6:04pm
Thanks! The first verse was more like a scene from a movie playing in my head from the day before. I finished the idea with my hands on the keyboard.
7th Jan 2019 5:42am
7th Jan 2019 6:00pm
For some reason that seems like a massive compliment! I love visceral reactions. Tears, laughs, anger, willies/fear, curiosity, sentiment, all good.
19th Jan 2019 00:56am
19th Jan 2019 1:02am
Welcome! Thank you. I look forward to reading your work! Another stay at home mom, that rocks!
