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real love
we love who we love...
the heart can't be bent
or persuaded towards another
it will have it's intended or no one
try and fool it with some faux lover
and the heart will scorn you
your body knows what the heart desires
the heart is Master over your passions
the heart wants what it wants
to quote Woody Allen
try and make love to another
and watch your endeavors wilt
when it's show time
the heart wills it and so it is done
let it be known and let it be written
when it comes to love
you'll know it's real
deep down in your soul
when you feel it
we love who we love...
nothing can change it
so hold onto your lover
accept them as they are
this is vital to happiness
and lastly be grateful for what you have
a soulmate comes but once in a lifetime
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Re. real love
Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 5:22pm
Oh sweet Brenda, such beautiful truth!
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6th Jan 2019 5:24pm
thank you beautiful Soulz for such a lovely comment... you made me smile...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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6th Jan 2019 5:27pm
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6th Jan 2019 5:29pm
thank you dearest Lawrence I always love it when you visit my pages...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
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6th Jan 2019 5:37pm
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6th Jan 2019 5:40pm
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6th Jan 2019 5:38pm
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6th Jan 2019 5:41pm
thank you graciously beautiful Rose you gifted me smiles with your visit...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
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6th Jan 2019 5:49pm
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Re: Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 5:55pm
Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 6:00pm
bull's eye Brenda!
body can mate with many...yet the soul only mates one and once only!
exact sentiment i felt and tried conveying in my scribble - "to write a poem sweet"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/294568-to-write-me-a-poem-sweet/
only to covey the shared message..
body can mate with many...yet the soul only mates one and once only!
exact sentiment i felt and tried conveying in my scribble - "to write a poem sweet"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/294568-to-write-me-a-poem-sweet/
only to covey the shared message..
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Re: Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 6:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Cold One I read your poem and know you understand well the heart of this write...
I deeply cherish you sharing with me...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply cherish you sharing with me...
love Brenda ❤
Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 7:07pm
How well I know these feelings, how blessed I've been.
Nicely worded, my Lady.
Nicely worded, my Lady.
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6th Jan 2019 7:10pm
thank you beautiful Teri it is a wonderful feeling... I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 7:21pm
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6th Jan 2019 7:27pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun this write actually stemmed from a pm where I said we love who we love and I started thinking about it and realized the heart can't be swayed in this matter... it just is... I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 7:33pm
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6th Jan 2019 7:35pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for feeling this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. real love
Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 7:45pm
What a wonderful, wonderful write, Crimmy. There it is, the side I love, soft, introspective, smart, beautiful.
Great thoughts.
Love,
Matthew.
Great thoughts.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 7:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew yes at heart I am soft...I cherish the love you show me deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2019 1:02am
Me too, my friend. You're wonderful.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. real love
6th Jan 2019 8:02pm
We love who we love, a universal truth. Emotions will have their way. I hope you get the real love you deserve...
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6th Jan 2019 8:04pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow in truth I have the one I love so I am blessed...
love you my friend...
Brenda 🌹
love you my friend...
Brenda 🌹
Re. real love
Anonymous
7th Jan 2019 2:29pm
You have just penned a very beautiful truth here, my beautiful Dark Angel. Love will have it's say. Give it light and let it breathe. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. real love
9th Jan 2019 9:43pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow for the love you've shown me on this write and over my heart...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. real love
7th Jan 2019 2:46pm
Thank you so much Brenda, we do indeed love who we love and so often we do not even get a choice- it just is. David xx
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9th Jan 2019 9:46pm
thank you graciously dearest David you inspired the thoughts that led to this write...so I thank you dear poet...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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7th Jan 2019 9:46pm
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9th Jan 2019 9:46pm
Re. real love
8th Jan 2019 4:12am
Too true Brenda, your message rings with both grace and gravitas. A wonderful marriage. Bravo sweet lady.
Daniel
Daniel
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9th Jan 2019 9:47pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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8th Jan 2019 6:22pm
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9th Jan 2019 9:48pm