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Feels Simply Bliss
Bliss it feels simply bliss
Gazing into eyes that are heaven
A universe undiscovered
All I need do is look deeper
To become totally lost in them
I confess that this attraction
Is eating at my soul
My heart feels the pull of them
I am the moon to her earth
Forever caught in the gravity of love
So captivating I wonder if I exist
Cause I forget to breathe
So the spell won’t be broken
My soul is touched
Just like my very sanity
Those eyes whisper beautifully
Sensually seductive
An addictive quality about them
That keeps me here gazing
Needing to see the colour of her soul
Gazing into eyes that are heaven
A universe undiscovered
All I need do is look deeper
To become totally lost in them
I confess that this attraction
Is eating at my soul
My heart feels the pull of them
I am the moon to her earth
Forever caught in the gravity of love
So captivating I wonder if I exist
Cause I forget to breathe
So the spell won’t be broken
My soul is touched
Just like my very sanity
Those eyes whisper beautifully
Sensually seductive
An addictive quality about them
That keeps me here gazing
Needing to see the colour of her soul
Published 5th Jan 2019
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5th Jan 2019 6:48am
What an absolutely beautiful poem! I really like the way that you write :)
5th Jan 2019 7:31am
30th Jun 2020 10:06am
Dear A,
I feel like a hack echoing NewBeginnings again, but he’s right this is a beautiful poem.
How lucky is the person to receive love like this. Lovely write. H🌷
I feel like a hack echoing NewBeginnings again, but he’s right this is a beautiful poem.
How lucky is the person to receive love like this. Lovely write. H🌷
30th Jun 2020 10:13am
8th Jan 2022 1:39pm
Ohh my this is just gorgeous, C!
It goes to slow you and remind me that your talent was always so profound and potent. That last line... "needing to see the colour of her soul" is freaking tattooed on my psyche now, it's so good.... sincerely!
Just superb poetry. Period.
Absolutely loved it.
🌹 - 💙
x
B
It goes to slow you and remind me that your talent was always so profound and potent. That last line... "needing to see the colour of her soul" is freaking tattooed on my psyche now, it's so good.... sincerely!
Just superb poetry. Period.
Absolutely loved it.
🌹 - 💙
x
B
