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lust
enter my depths if you are willing
touch me with words of knowing
one soul to another
without promises of tomorrow
today is what we have if you are inclined
to caress my intellect
a man of your caliber with obvious intelligence
stirs me deeply
arouses my senses
touches all of my pleasure zones
you enter with force
I feel you
commanding my attention
taking me to your level of understanding
here we connect primally
with a hunger that has long been denied
then you pin down my self-doubt
and fuck me senseless
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Re. lust
3rd Jan 2019 4:49pm
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3rd Jan 2019 4:51pm
Re. lust
3rd Jan 2019 5:56pm
all been told in a sensual way not missed understood
flowing openly
nicely done
flowing openly
nicely done
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3rd Jan 2019 5:58pm
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3rd Jan 2019 7:18pm
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3rd Jan 2019 7:33pm
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3rd Jan 2019 7:34pm
Re. lust
3rd Jan 2019 8:00pm
I agree with Soledad...your last lines shaped this sweet welcoming verse into an arousing takeover...the sexy minds always have the best sex...
lustfully yours anytime you need
Jeff
lustfully yours anytime you need
Jeff
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3rd Jan 2019 8:03pm
Re. lust
3rd Jan 2019 9:16pm
Phenomenal penning as always Brenda!👏👏
As everyone else said,
that ending is superb!
Well done👏
As everyone else said,
that ending is superb!
Well done👏
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter I always love when you come to visit...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2019 9:20pm
Oooh... this is absolutely fantabulous, my beautiful Dark Angel! That ending had the power of a punch behind it. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:18pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow I'm so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. lust
3rd Jan 2019 9:51pm
I like the touch of "self doubt". You have ever reason to feel confidence in this. It's an erotic joy. Enjoyed this thoroughly, Brenda!
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for feeling that line... yeah that damned self-doubt has to be pinned first with me lol...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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3rd Jan 2019 10:51pm
Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for such a very beautiful comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Entering your mind with intellect then fucking you senseless is my motto! 😏
Excellent write!
Excellent write!
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Lyrical One your a man who knows what he's doing it's clear from the way you write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 2:22am
Yes stimulating with the mind first, gets the body warmer up...😉🌹
You really struck deep into my minds eye with this passionate ink...😊🌺
Brenda you are a very sensual passionate woman..💋
love Thomas💕🐺
You really struck deep into my minds eye with this passionate ink...😊🌺
Brenda you are a very sensual passionate woman..💋
love Thomas💕🐺
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:23pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for feeling this write so deeply i'm so happy you did...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 5:01pm
How could I not feel the depth of your ink dearest Brenda...it was so touching in so many beautiful ways that feelings just burst out of me as I read and read...😊💐
love Thomas🌹🐺
love Thomas🌹🐺
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 8:07am
Fantastic ink culminating with a perfect ending.
Deliciously done
Deliciously done
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:24pm
thank you graciously dearest Ragnar for such a wonderful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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4th Jan 2019 9:21am
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4th Jan 2019 1:24pm
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun so happy you felt this write so deeply...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:35pm
I felt this deeply, and know of the one you desire. Beautifully written Brenda x
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Re: Re. lust
4th Jan 2019 1:52pm
thank you beautiful Velvet for feeling this so deeply I'm curious who you think it is lol but that may be a pandora's box if opened...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lust
5th Jan 2019 10:52pm
stands ... tips hat, and applauds. The mind truly is a powerful aphrodesiac ... as is your ink!
As always, i love reading your words
~Wicked
As always, i love reading your words
~Wicked
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Re: Re. lust
6th Jan 2019 4:37pm
thank you most graciously dearest Wicked One it's so good to see you back... I deeply appreciate your beautiful and gracious thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 1:43pm
Oh darling Brenda, this is such an incredible write. I truly felt this so deeply. You are bloody fantastic.
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6th Jan 2019 4:38pm
thank you graciously beautiful Soulz you put a smile on my face...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 4:43pm
Hugs 🤗
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Re. lust
9th Feb 2019 00:09am
My senses perk up every time I read your writes. I know the ride is going to be great and I’m on the edge of my seat.
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9th Feb 2019 00:11am