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Rain
I usually love the rain.
But for some reason,
not today.
I feel unusually
under the weather
Under these skies
of smoky grey.
I wish I were the rain,
free to fall
wherever I choose.
For the rain
has nothing to gain,
and it has nothing to lose.
It comes and goes
as it pleases,
and never has to explain.
It never has to feel defeated,
or ever feel ashamed.
When something goes wrong,
It never has to take blame.
How free I would be,
If I could be the rain.🌧
But for some reason,
not today.
I feel unusually
under the weather
Under these skies
of smoky grey.
I wish I were the rain,
free to fall
wherever I choose.
For the rain
has nothing to gain,
and it has nothing to lose.
It comes and goes
as it pleases,
and never has to explain.
It never has to feel defeated,
or ever feel ashamed.
When something goes wrong,
It never has to take blame.
How free I would be,
If I could be the rain.🌧
Author's Note
Sitting at work, watching the raindrops hit the window. I guess I’m in my feelings today.
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Re. Rain
3rd Jan 2019 3:10pm
Wonderful ... engaging write ... I'm doing the very same thing ... watching cold rain fall ... thanks for letting me drift away with you my dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. Rain
3rd Jan 2019 3:53pm
Re. Rain
Tight write Miss Lovely, make us think of this rain metaphor in different ways
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Re. Rain
3rd Jan 2019 4:00pm
Wonderful rainy day piece👏
"How free I would be,
If I could be the rain.🌧"
I like!👏
"How free I would be,
If I could be the rain.🌧"
I like!👏
1
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
4th Jan 2019 12:38pm
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Re. Rain
6th Jan 2019 1:47pm
Re. Rain
10th Jan 2019 8:50am
Beautifully written. I think we all wish we were the rain sometimes when times get tough...
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Re. Rain
this is pretty and i can sense the pain in the beauty
and pain jus like rain can have a purpose
rain brings growth and pain can as well
enjoyed this...
and pain jus like rain can have a purpose
rain brings growth and pain can as well
enjoyed this...
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Re. Rain
3rd Feb 2019 8:40pm
I almost wish it was more, that I could continue reading but it was just enough.... Thank you!
This poem tells a story, love it!
This poem tells a story, love it!
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Re. Rain
3rd Feb 2019 11:19pm
Great observations about the rain. It would be nice to come and go as you please.
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Re: Re. Rain
3rd Feb 2019 11:25pm
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Dec 2020 10:45am
27th Feb 2019 12:50pm
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