Rage on display.

thank you it's about wanting to rage at my coworkers but holding it inside. lol … rather difficult at times.

I enjoy the format and rhyme of this very much.  While you have friendly feedback listed, because you have messaged and requested honest comments, I would suggest the following to really tighten this up. You can also apply it to current and future writes:  

Firstly, while it's perfectly acceptable to capitalize the beginning of each line, as classic poetry, it also make it a bit difficult to read where modern poetry is concerned. Just as everything else, poetry evolves over time - you can merely compare historical literature with modern and the difference is visible. Therefore, I would suggest you cap only the beginning of sentences as demonstrated below:  

Rage on display. (<-- is there a reason you end stopped your title? )

Tree tops sway in suspense[;]  
(As) her rage slowly builds.  
The progression intense,  
(It) pour[ing] through the fields.  

It deadens all flowers[;]  
(As) the sun tries to flee.  
(And) in the darkest of hours,  
she's a hundred degrees.  

The animals pause,  
(And) the stars look away[;]  
(For) her deadliest flaws  
are all on display.  

You can hear a pin drop,  
from a bomb in her case.  
(And) [S]he feels the world stop  
with a grin on her face.  

The parenthetical references are recommended for removal while the brackets insertion.  If you adhere to the suggestions, your poem would look like the following:  

Tree tops sway in suspense;  
her rage slowly builds.  
The progression intense,  
pouring through the fields.  

It deadens all flowers;  
the sun tries to flee.  
In the darkest of hours  
she's a hundred degrees.  

Animals pause  
stars look away;  
her deadliest flaws  
are all on display.  

You can hear a pin drop  
from a bomb in her case.  
She feels the world stop  
with a grin on her face.  

Some other tips - watch your repetition of words. For example, you use  'the' 6x, and 'and' 3x; all of them begin a line - which is a triple rep.  If this were a longer poem, you maybe could get by with 'the'; however, not that many ands starting lines.   Also,  repetitive punctuation can be somewhat separating. For example,  

It deadens all flowers;  
the sun tries to flee.  
In the darkest of hours
she's a hundred degrees.  

Using a semi connects two independent clauses beautifully.  I've also removed all the commas, as the end of a line denotes a natural break; this connects the lines also by removing the extra pause at the point of a pause.  

My advice to you is to watch your repetitive words, punctuation, and capitalization.  If you're going for a classic feel, try to start each line differently.  Also, read, read, read, the classics. Then read, read, read modernists as well. You will see how poetry is constantly evolving.  

Lastly, remember, critique is largely the opinion of the critiquer, except for proper grammar and spelling ( which can even be manipulated to suit dialect and style, i.e. - EE Cummings,  etc.  

Bottom line, you're a good writer.  

Thank you for sharing - I hope this helps.

I appreciate your opinions. It's a tough one  because poetry is really abstract art up to the artist. Thank you for breaking it all down for me, I never really thought about some of those things. I'm a big one for syllables and rhyming every other line. I'm all about the flow. My spelling and use of certain punctuations. Pauses are powerful, and so are words when used correctly. I feel I have my own style because I really haven't read much of other's poems. Dr suess is a creative genius though. His style seems to be similar to mine. Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to do this !! :)

You're very welcome!  Thank you for accepting it in the intent it was given: as a gift.

I look forward to reading more from you!

I agree with Ahavati that you are a good writer and with all of her suggestions.

But you will become an even better writer when you begin to deviate from this rhyming quatrain scheme. And you will expand your audience of readers.  

If readers anticipate that every poem you pen will be identical in rhyme and rhythm, they will eventually wander away towards others serving up more variety.  

Thank you for coming to us for an assessment of your work. Feel free to request more critique when you do change up your style and want honest feedback.

I really enjoyed your expression of emotions through natural imagery. You are a really great writer, and I thoroughly enjoyed the poem! I hope you will take the time to read some of my poetry as well! Happy New Year!

Thank you , I needed to hear that. :) Happy new year to you also, and you just gained a follower. !