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Angel Within Me
there’s a peace deep within me
I know it comes from your luv
heart feels free of a weary past
you’ve given me strength
so forward I move to change
leave behind hindering voices
rejoice knowing an Angel like you
is watching over me every moment
dreams provide visions of your smile
peaceful serenity in my soul
reassures me you’re always near
I surrender my all to your comforting luv
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
I know it comes from your luv
heart feels free of a weary past
you’ve given me strength
so forward I move to change
leave behind hindering voices
rejoice knowing an Angel like you
is watching over me every moment
dreams provide visions of your smile
peaceful serenity in my soul
reassures me you’re always near
I surrender my all to your comforting luv
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 21st Dec 2018
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21st Dec 2018 5:15am
11th Jan 2019 3:13am
Hey Rose.......thank you my sweet friend.......thinking of him motivates me very much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
21st Dec 2018 7:09am
Flowery,
That's just beautiful.
You're truly an angel yourself, and I'm sure there are many souls watching over you, because of the incredible person you are.
All my love,
Matthew.
That's just beautiful.
You're truly an angel yourself, and I'm sure there are many souls watching over you, because of the incredible person you are.
All my love,
Matthew.
11th Jan 2019 3:19am
Awe Matthew........you’re such a blessing.......I believe Angels watch from above and some walk among us.......thank you for being one that walks among us.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 5:35am
Purple,
You're so good for a person's heart...but bad for the teeth, because you're so darn sweet!
Love you, my friend,
Matthew.
You're so good for a person's heart...but bad for the teeth, because you're so darn sweet!
Love you, my friend,
Matthew.
21st Dec 2018 7:57am
You never fail t0 amaze and inspire me. This one is on the RL Thank you for sharing
11th Jan 2019 3:21am
Awe TIG......you make me blush.......you’re an inspiration yourself.......thank you for the honor of the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Dec 2018 1:11pm
"... so forward I move to change
leave behind hindering voices"
... great words - reminiscent of the opening lines (& theme) of Mary Oliver's poem "The Journey" ( https://wordsfortheyear.com/2015/12/31/the-journey-by-mary-oliver/ )
leave behind hindering voices"
... great words - reminiscent of the opening lines (& theme) of Mary Oliver's poem "The Journey" ( https://wordsfortheyear.com/2015/12/31/the-journey-by-mary-oliver/ )
11th Jan 2019 3:25am
Hey Josh......thank you so much for your visit and sharing that beautiful ink of Mary Oliver.......enjoyed much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Dec 2018 10:15pm
"I surrender my all to your comforting luv." A fine concluding line to an excellent poem. I always suspected there's an angel in you. You possess that kind of luv.
11th Jan 2019 3:29am
Awe Crow.......your kind words always hug my heart.......I thank you for the blessing.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Dec 2018 7:55pm
What more do you need to say? A very touchingly simple yet powerful poem. There are many highlights here but the one about the angel watching over you struck me most. :-)
11th Jan 2019 3:32am
Hey Billy.......I’m so happy you enjoyed my ink.......glad that it touched you.......thank you for taking time to share your thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
