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sleep
Published 20th Dec 2018
| Edited 9th Jan 2019
Author's Note
This is sleep irony: the persona offers consolation to the lonely night in exchange for a kiss. The persona will safeguard the night until danger has passed. This link (copy-paste into your browser) takes the reader to a more decipherable page for ease of reading: http://mydo.cx/MmZiNjUw
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20th Dec 2018 6:54pm
21st Dec 2018 1:45am
Indeed, snugglebuck! If night cannot console the sleepless, then the awake might as well safeguard the night. The irony is that the apparent victim has become the benevolent by a complete role reversal.
26th Dec 2018 5:17pm
Love This....
your work has a beautiful flow
almost like the beginning of a lullaby..
XOXO
Fire
your work has a beautiful flow
almost like the beginning of a lullaby..
XOXO
Fire
26th Dec 2018 6:31pm
Thank you, Firebyrd. Yes: a lullaby. I was hoping it would breathe an atmosphere of comfort both for the consoler and the disconsolate.
23rd Jan 2019 1:03am
23rd Jan 2019 2:34am
