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a pink invitation
this is a demonic vibe
meant to lick and bite
I will see you titillated
legs spread
a pink invitation for the damned
feel as they enter with heat
licking your cunt
tasting your juices
as they go soul deep
I know you feel me
we ride the same wavelengths
is your pussy purring yet?
wet from my intentions
my minions go to work
with greedy hungry fingers
they plunge into your pie
lapping at your mind
feeding off your intellect
they convey your darkest fantasies
a reel to reel of you and I
mmm I lick, swirl and taste your bud
you're heavy with nectar
I slow down now
you're about to cum undone
I want this to be an otherworldly seduction
so hold up baby not so fast
I bite your nipple
then proceed to please you
your climax builds as I touch your soul
here we comingle
riding the sensual waves
lady love in full bloom
we touch the celestial skies
the divine and dark
the oldest magic of them all
bring you to the brink
on the back of ecstasy's wings
you begin to pulsate
a little shaken I hold you
while you experience sex
the way it should be
Published 19th Dec 2018
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19th Dec 2018 00:27am
19th Dec 2018 00:37am
Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 1:10am
"my minions...
plunge into your pie
lapping at your mind
feeding off your intellect
they convey your darkest fantasies"
This is the pure essence of erotica,
so deep and delicate, yet so powerful.
I can almost see it, smell it, taste it. Beautiful ink my sweet one. J
plunge into your pie
lapping at your mind
feeding off your intellect
they convey your darkest fantasies"
This is the pure essence of erotica,
so deep and delicate, yet so powerful.
I can almost see it, smell it, taste it. Beautiful ink my sweet one. J
19th Dec 2018 2:55pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul for such a wonderful comment I am beaming and blushing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
19th Dec 2018 1:21am
One of the most sensual passionate loving of another...Such romance showing through with two women unconditionally pleasuring. Beautiful imagery and deep feelings of your lover my dearest Brenda.
Love Thomas🌹🐺
Love Thomas🌹🐺
19th Dec 2018 2:56pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas though I must confess this is more of a lustful fantasy say giggling... I love that you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
19th Dec 2018 3:01am
19th Dec 2018 2:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence I'm so happy this appealed to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 11:12am
"Cum undone" oh lordy this is pure erotica.
19th Dec 2018 2:57pm
19th Dec 2018 11:30am
Damn Brenda. I almost wish I was a woman after reading this. Hot write my friend. David x
19th Dec 2018 2:58pm
thank you graciously dearest David for the love on this write I love your comment...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
19th Dec 2018 2:51pm
In narrative theory, if the destructive or dissapring factor, the conflict, is missing, the story collapses; satisfaction ensues.
This soul loving itself as other spiral reframes same-gender expression as metaphoric of self-acceptance and validation. Accentuating the positive.
This soul loving itself as other spiral reframes same-gender expression as metaphoric of self-acceptance and validation. Accentuating the positive.
19th Dec 2018 3:00pm
thank you graciously dearest RT for such a thoughtful comment... you know it's funny you saw self love in this... as I've never actually been with a woman...your deep insight to my inner workings is awe inspiring...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
19th Dec 2018 6:50pm
I have grown to distrust something about people who categorically reject their own gender. I'm totally poly, and my polymates having interactive lives is part of what draws me to them.
A woman who can connect with other women has a vote of confidence....she understands more what turns her on and off and is often more able to communicate it.
One thing that amazes me is in relationships would be partners hold back from educationally inspiring their partners...instructing them in how they want to be touched....and instead will simply expect that the other person will somehow intuit what to do.
Ridiculous.
It feels good when you do this, say this, and don't do this. That would take so much personal risk out of it.
If some people are too forward...overwhelming....there are many others who show no cards at all and punish themselves waiting for telepathy that never happens.
Ask for what you want in no uncertain terms....and see what happens.
I think women can often jump that step since they are in familiar territory, but then women are human too.
So...it's the theory. But, still....it starts the ball rolling....we don't know what our soul needs....so we ask it....but until then....humanity!
A woman who can connect with other women has a vote of confidence....she understands more what turns her on and off and is often more able to communicate it.
One thing that amazes me is in relationships would be partners hold back from educationally inspiring their partners...instructing them in how they want to be touched....and instead will simply expect that the other person will somehow intuit what to do.
Ridiculous.
It feels good when you do this, say this, and don't do this. That would take so much personal risk out of it.
If some people are too forward...overwhelming....there are many others who show no cards at all and punish themselves waiting for telepathy that never happens.
Ask for what you want in no uncertain terms....and see what happens.
I think women can often jump that step since they are in familiar territory, but then women are human too.
So...it's the theory. But, still....it starts the ball rolling....we don't know what our soul needs....so we ask it....but until then....humanity!
19th Dec 2018 10:54pm
A wonderful fantasy, Brenda. I love how you introduce minions as assistants, but that's just one detail. This is both amusing and quite erotic, a difficult combination to pull off.
21st Dec 2018 2:02pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow so happy you found this stimulating...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
20th Dec 2018 12:54pm
21st Dec 2018 2:03pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for the wonderful comment that gifted me many smiles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
