Content Warning : Do you want to continue?
This poem contains content which some readers may find disturbing.
It is unsuitable for children or anyone who is easily offended.
YES
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
NO
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
deepundergroundpoetry.com
Slash and burn
Hands flaying the air
gasping for breath
screams unuttered
eyes bulging in despair
laugher, gleeful
Loud, cruel
bodies flashing
in mirrors
knifes slashing
anguish
pain
Engorged tools
rip the cleft
made for birthing
made for pleasure
they rip without mercy
plunging and thrusting
coupled uncoupled
a parade of erections
succumbed
fell
patrol
match
The fire burn
merrily
silence at last
At last.
gasping for breath
screams unuttered
eyes bulging in despair
laugher, gleeful
Loud, cruel
bodies flashing
in mirrors
knifes slashing
anguish
pain
Engorged tools
rip the cleft
made for birthing
made for pleasure
they rip without mercy
plunging and thrusting
coupled uncoupled
a parade of erections
succumbed
fell
patrol
match
The fire burn
merrily
silence at last
At last.
Published 11th Nov 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 7
reads 867
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
11th Nov 2011 3:43pm
I entered this simple poem in the competition within this portal. I am sharing this with everybody...Thank You for reading.
11th Nov 2011 9:06pm
the intensity is unreal....this reads like a gang rape that ends homicidally....such a wicked concept....at least thats how i see it....i wonder if thats what you were shooting for....lol
11th Nov 2011 11:18pm
Thank you dear Goodest. Yes that was what it was, you got that so well. Its always very encouraging to evoke comments from poets like you. Thank you.
12th Nov 2011 10:33pm
12th Nov 2011 10:55pm
17th Nov 2011 12:47pm
18th Nov 2011 00:33am
oh yes... tragic is what it is. I have often wondered how that victim felt or what she thought about when she was about to die...omg. Thanks Paul.
