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Renga #2 ...commitment...
I
time borrowed
for another year ...credit
...still good
II
two kittens...
round my ankles
softly winding
III
appreciate today
tomorrow...
still theory
IV
bite my tongue
make decision...wiser
not to speak
V
to see our
Tamarind tree bloom
with you...
time borrowed
for another year ...credit
...still good
II
two kittens...
round my ankles
softly winding
III
appreciate today
tomorrow...
still theory
IV
bite my tongue
make decision...wiser
not to speak
V
to see our
Tamarind tree bloom
with you...
Published 14th Dec 2018
| Edited 6th Jan 2020
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14th Dec 2018 5:16pm
14th Dec 2018 5:25pm
Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 5:18pm
I love these! The beauty of simple things exemplified. One day I'm gonna try my hand at a haiku. Never done one yet...
14th Dec 2018 5:33pm
Thank you Wilow... for the comment and the visit...
when you feel the need to explore Haiku, come on over to the Haiku Pond Group and have a look around...Ely
when you feel the need to explore Haiku, come on over to the Haiku Pond Group and have a look around...Ely
14th Dec 2018 5:20pm
Thank you for a most gratifying comment, amigo mío...and for including this piece in youtr RL... Ely
14th Dec 2018 5:26pm
Wonderful haikus Ely 👏👏
I especially love this,
"appreciate today...
tomorrow
still theory" profoundly true Beautiful message! 👏👏
I especially love this,
"appreciate today...
tomorrow
still theory" profoundly true Beautiful message! 👏👏
14th Dec 2018 8:44pm
Many thanks, Hunter...for your comment...I am much gratified... stop by anytime... Ely
15th Dec 2018 4:15pm
"bite my tongue
make decision...wiser
not to speak"
... yes, we here in Portugal know that one ... :))
make decision...wiser
not to speak"
... yes, we here in Portugal know that one ... :))
15th Dec 2018 5:07pm
Ah, yes, it is to giggle...and to recall...
this is a different culture here...
it's not the same at all... is it, my dear? Ely
this is a different culture here...
it's not the same at all... is it, my dear? Ely
