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Is it ONLY recreation without INTIMACY?
I dived into You and You into me
Cool waters refresh and touch
You feel wet but I feel clean
You felt a little; still I felt much
I swam within Your womanhood
Gulping down You with each gasp
Feeling guiltily better than I should
Wanting more than just a piece of ass
You only want me to fill Your cup
And in waters lake to play
I always tried to fill You up
And tried to get You to stay
No time for underwater exploration
Delving into depths of our soul
Only time for play recreation
I need more and You know
Unable to swim ashore
For I cannot let You go
I allow intimacy to sink
as ancient lore
Because I love You so
Cool waters refresh and touch
You feel wet but I feel clean
You felt a little; still I felt much
I swam within Your womanhood
Gulping down You with each gasp
Feeling guiltily better than I should
Wanting more than just a piece of ass
You only want me to fill Your cup
And in waters lake to play
I always tried to fill You up
And tried to get You to stay
No time for underwater exploration
Delving into depths of our soul
Only time for play recreation
I need more and You know
Unable to swim ashore
For I cannot let You go
I allow intimacy to sink
as ancient lore
Because I love You so
Published 14th Dec 2018
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14th Dec 2018 5:56am
Love starts in many was
Not all starts have to be so intimate
best loves are those left to grow without intimacies confusing the new shoots
Not all starts have to be so intimate
best loves are those left to grow without intimacies confusing the new shoots
14th Dec 2018 6:02am
I've been in many a relationship
where there was little intimacy
Some were super fun and I've
no complaints but it didn't last
and I've always thought that it
was due to the lack of
intimacy.
where there was little intimacy
Some were super fun and I've
no complaints but it didn't last
and I've always thought that it
was due to the lack of
intimacy.
14th Dec 2018 6:10am
I'm obviously talking up a new love being left to grow without the urgency of intimacies
Yes definitely when time then beautiful be the love making with a core strength created by really knowing understanding the one your with
Yes definitely when time then beautiful be the love making with a core strength created by really knowing understanding the one your with
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14th Dec 2018 8:02am
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14th Dec 2018 9:31am
14th Dec 2018 12:52pm
Lovely ink Tallen. For me friendship has always been important first and foremost. Sometimes intimacy grows from that and it blossoms or withers but the friendships have invariably remained. I have a small, select group of such 'exes' going back 30+ years and once in a while .... for old times sake :)
14th Dec 2018 5:30pm
I am still Friends with nearly all my exes.
I believe in the Friendship 1st,
as well.
Believe or not,
my longest relationship
had zero intimacy in it.
But of the 7 years, only the 1st 4 were bliss.
I believe in the Friendship 1st,
as well.
Believe or not,
my longest relationship
had zero intimacy in it.
But of the 7 years, only the 1st 4 were bliss.
