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Belief!
I believe in you!
Why can't you understand that?
You have accomplished many things
That a lot of people can only
Dream about!
Contemplate on what I am saying!
You can do anything you put
Your mind to!
Don't stop if you fail!!!
Never give up on your dreams!!!!
Never stop once you reach them!!!
Continue reaching for the stars
Once you have accomplished each goal.
Create new ones!
I have faith in you!!!
Do you?
Why can't you understand that?
You have accomplished many things
That a lot of people can only
Dream about!
Contemplate on what I am saying!
You can do anything you put
Your mind to!
Don't stop if you fail!!!
Never give up on your dreams!!!!
Never stop once you reach them!!!
Continue reaching for the stars
Once you have accomplished each goal.
Create new ones!
I have faith in you!!!
Do you?
Published 12th Dec 2018
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13th Dec 2018 1:38am
Often supportive rhetoric is not enough;
often, friendship must be the constant companion.
But the latter takes lots of work.
Nice short spillage of ink.
(& welcome to the Deep [end of the pool] )
often, friendship must be the constant companion.
But the latter takes lots of work.
Nice short spillage of ink.
(& welcome to the Deep [end of the pool] )
13th Dec 2018 6:39am
I believe in you!
Why can't you understand that?
You have accomplished many things that a lot of people can only dream about! <--shorten?
Contemplate on what I am saying!
You can do anything you put your mind to!
Don't stop if you fail!!!
Never give up on your dreams!!!!
Never stop once you reach them!!!
Continue reaching for the stars
Once you have accomplished each goal.
Create new ones!
I have faith in you!!!
Do you?
restructured it how I read it.
overall loved it though. Whoever you believe in is a very lucky person. :)
Why can't you understand that?
You have accomplished many things that a lot of people can only dream about! <--shorten?
Contemplate on what I am saying!
You can do anything you put your mind to!
Don't stop if you fail!!!
Never give up on your dreams!!!!
Never stop once you reach them!!!
Continue reaching for the stars
Once you have accomplished each goal.
Create new ones!
I have faith in you!!!
Do you?
restructured it how I read it.
overall loved it though. Whoever you believe in is a very lucky person. :)
16th Dec 2018 12:23pm
