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Find a way
Everything I like I loathe you see
I'm my own worst enemy
I'm full of advice that I can't heed
I'm full of love that no-one needs
My hearts on my sleeve but I'm wearing a vest
But I give it my all I always try my best
I over love and I over think
I get depressed and I over drink
I don't even know what I'm trying to say
But I do prevail I find a way
I'm my own worst enemy
I'm full of advice that I can't heed
I'm full of love that no-one needs
My hearts on my sleeve but I'm wearing a vest
But I give it my all I always try my best
I over love and I over think
I get depressed and I over drink
I don't even know what I'm trying to say
But I do prevail I find a way
Published 11th Dec 2018
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11th Dec 2018 2:51pm
Nice straight-to-the-point poem, cheesa. We are our own worst enemies, but I like the optimism that you've ended the poem with. No matter how hard things get, you'd always find a way to overcome the problemas.
Well done, and thanks for participating in my competition!
Well done, and thanks for participating in my competition!
12th Dec 2018 5:41am
11th Dec 2018 7:26pm
12th Dec 2018 5:41am
