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God of War
Published 11th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2018 7:11am
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26th Feb 2019 5:10am
thank you so much - smiling muchly :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
11th Dec 2018 7:37am
Astound job. You did some pretty good bleeding here and understandably given your experience. Love it David!
26th Feb 2019 5:11am
Anonymous
11th Dec 2018 8:39am
Bear Hugs my brotha !
26th Feb 2019 5:12am
Anonymous
11th Dec 2018 1:43pm
Confusing indeed. That ain't my kinda love. Lots and lots of big hugs for you, my friend :-)
26th Feb 2019 5:13am
11th Dec 2018 3:35pm
Powerful piece such a true strong message I fully agree with you 'tis very confusing👏👏
26th Feb 2019 5:15am
Yeah it's certainly confusing - thank you for your comment :-)))))))))))))))))))
11th Dec 2018 9:12pm
With both sides claiming God is on their side and calling it a "just war" - no, it's just war.
26th Feb 2019 5:16am
20th Dec 2018 7:21pm
My Grandfather was in the war to end all wars. He suffered greatly from the experience but told only one story over and over again.
After a horrific artillery attack he and his surviving comrades were forced to bury the dead in shell holes.
They were in pieces.
After a horrific artillery attack he and his surviving comrades were forced to bury the dead in shell holes.
They were in pieces.
26th Feb 2019 5:18am
so very sad :-(((((( my grandfather was shot by firing squad suffering from
shellshock
thank you for sharing :-)
shellshock
thank you for sharing :-)
3rd Mar 2019 7:32pm
Wow!
I can't top that. Those WWI brass-turds were 'firing squad' sob's, weren't they?
I can't top that. Those WWI brass-turds were 'firing squad' sob's, weren't they?
