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The day
She once wished for love,
Today that wish came true.
In the blink of an eye.
There she was,
ready to love.
With broken hearts as her armor.
Only two mattered.
Hers and his.
Just then she realized her love was pain,
her love was torment.
So she set him free.
Today that wish came true.
In the blink of an eye.
There she was,
ready to love.
With broken hearts as her armor.
Only two mattered.
Hers and his.
Just then she realized her love was pain,
her love was torment.
So she set him free.
Published 7th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2018 5:30pm
"Just then she realized her love was pain,
her love was torment." Love is pain! How true! It's the deepest and most consuming. But to "set someone free" means to recognise that love is extreme and unconditional. You set them free, but you don't stop loving them. Hence your pain is enduring and everlasting. Beautiful write. J
her love was torment." Love is pain! How true! It's the deepest and most consuming. But to "set someone free" means to recognise that love is extreme and unconditional. You set them free, but you don't stop loving them. Hence your pain is enduring and everlasting. Beautiful write. J
8th Dec 2018 9:50pm
Oh yes... you get this. Its crazy how a few lines can mean so much right.
