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Let Me In
Candlelight dances across the room
Out of all these shadows
I'm hoping one is you
You’ve been away for so long
You told me to be strong
But I miss you so much
I want to feel your touch
The day you went away
You told me not to cry
As your spirit left me
And rose to the sky
Now the world seems so cold.
How does it feel
up in the atmosphere?
While my life begins to unfold
I await the day
I can see you again
When you open the door
And let me in
Out of all these shadows
I'm hoping one is you
You’ve been away for so long
You told me to be strong
But I miss you so much
I want to feel your touch
The day you went away
You told me not to cry
As your spirit left me
And rose to the sky
Now the world seems so cold.
How does it feel
up in the atmosphere?
While my life begins to unfold
I await the day
I can see you again
When you open the door
And let me in
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Re. Let Me In
7th Dec 2018 2:42am
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7th Dec 2018 3:58am
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7th Dec 2018 4:47am
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Re. Let Me In
7th Dec 2018 9:17am
Beautiful depth of soulful feelings and of eternal love...very nice my dear...🌹😊🐺
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7th Dec 2018 4:01pm
Bittersweet. Pining over past love is so hard.
Nicely expressed with excellent imagery Carol.
Don't stop now, I want more!
JJ
Nicely expressed with excellent imagery Carol.
Don't stop now, I want more!
JJ
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