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More To Come
No rhyme, no reason to report
This mind has lost its discipline
I kiss concentration off
With her hand upon my thigh
She whispers an ancient spell
Enough to make the righteous hard
I consider it her finest gift
And celibacy now seems a curse
I slip myself between her thighs
And listen to her murmured words
Their lilt makes me harder still
Driving me right to the brink
But I pause, it seems in time
Allowing her to reach that peak
The crescendo is one that we share
And in mutual delight
We can feel the ceiling fan
Its current playing on our skin
We cannot help but drift asleep
Dreams reminding there is more to come.
This mind has lost its discipline
I kiss concentration off
With her hand upon my thigh
She whispers an ancient spell
Enough to make the righteous hard
I consider it her finest gift
And celibacy now seems a curse
I slip myself between her thighs
And listen to her murmured words
Their lilt makes me harder still
Driving me right to the brink
But I pause, it seems in time
Allowing her to reach that peak
The crescendo is one that we share
And in mutual delight
We can feel the ceiling fan
Its current playing on our skin
We cannot help but drift asleep
Dreams reminding there is more to come.
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5th Dec 2018 11:57pm
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6th Dec 2018 00:10am
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 00:15am
Can't wait for the next round. Good ink. J
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6th Dec 2018 00:39am
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 00:38am
Damn, Crow.. dig this.. awesome brother..
Dave
Dave
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6th Dec 2018 00:45am
Thank you Dave. I made a deliberate effort to avoid my lockstep of rhythm and rhyme. It's something I should probably pursue, and not go quite as much for cadence and the ring of specific words. Thank you again...
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6th Dec 2018 2:31am
I have enjoyed your foray into something different. But you do you, crowfly. You do it so well!!
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6th Dec 2018 11:52pm
I'm trying not to rely on rhythm and rhyme so much. Free form is something that takes a skill with words I largely lack. So, yes, I will be me. Thank you Eerie!
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6th Dec 2018 5:35am
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6th Dec 2018 11:54pm
I usually tend to be a little harsher, verging on the grotesque. This time I tried for tenderness, and I'm so glad you enjoyed!
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6th Dec 2018 11:55pm
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 11:39am
lovely, thank you
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6th Dec 2018 11:56pm
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6th Dec 2018 8:20pm
damn it, dearest, Sir Crow
I really enjoyed this sexy write
for personal reasons, I'll keep to myself...
love Brenda 💋
I really enjoyed this sexy write
for personal reasons, I'll keep to myself...
love Brenda 💋
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You have me curious, Brenda. Suffice it to say I appreciate your kind comment. And thank you for the inclusion on your RL!
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7th Dec 2018 3:08pm
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11th Dec 2018 00:35am
Thank you Velvet. I'm glad you enjoyed the romance. Intimacy is hard for me to pull off, so your words give me a lift.
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9th Dec 2018 3:10pm
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11th Dec 2018 00:36am