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New
Got that brand new car smell
All of the sales tags are still attached
The cork on that Pinot Noir still in place
Kitten eyes still closed
Sealed in bubble wrap
That first cry in the delivery room
Too much saliva in that kiss
That first fizz from the soda can
Choking from the first inhale
Speech slurred from one shot
Red in the bed but will do it again
I am new and nervous.
All of the sales tags are still attached
The cork on that Pinot Noir still in place
Kitten eyes still closed
Sealed in bubble wrap
That first cry in the delivery room
Too much saliva in that kiss
That first fizz from the soda can
Choking from the first inhale
Speech slurred from one shot
Red in the bed but will do it again
I am new and nervous.
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Re. New
5th Dec 2018 9:32pm
Thanks for taking us for a trip down memory lane. Hope you experience many more positive firsts in your life.
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Re. New
5th Dec 2018 9:44pm
The various things that may stick in memory from so many first occasions.
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Re: Re. New
5th Dec 2018 9:54pm
Just a series of one liners to start. I'm actually visiting other pages getting a feel for what is allowed and what isn't.
Re. New
5th Dec 2018 10:00pm
Wow! So many similar memories and You laid 'em out in a wonderful happy manner.
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- Edited 20th Dec 2018 2:45am
6th Dec 2018 00:02am
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Re. New
30th Dec 2018 9:09am
Re. New
27th Feb 2019 2:14pm
Wow ... this is great ... each line drew me further in ... till the end ... where I had to reread the poem ... bravo my poetess ...
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Re. New
27th Feb 2019 2:25pm