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Favoring one's Promise
An empty bottle
a quiet storm
laying there in
bed still favouring
the intoxicating
scent of intimate
promises
the vow of forever
never materialized.
a quiet storm
laying there in
bed still favouring
the intoxicating
scent of intimate
promises
the vow of forever
never materialized.
Published 3rd Dec 2018
Author's Note
Brevity about the false promise of love, that never materialized.
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3rd Dec 2018 6:21pm
It happens. You are still 'Leading Lady' in the production of your life. Promises like rules broken without thought cause distress but will make you stronger. Good write MR.
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2018 7:43pm
Love is a fairy tale that speaks of promises broken. Love hurts. Love, to be such, must be absolute and unconditional. Love is a heartbreak. Yet, love is the motor of life. Hugs. J
Sad.
I feel that this poem is short because its words are hard to find.
Sadness and promises sharing stories of loneliness.
Well written.
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I feel that this poem is short because its words are hard to find.
Sadness and promises sharing stories of loneliness.
Well written.
... ... ... ...
17th Mar 2020 7:25pm
17th Mar 2020 10:54pm
17th Mar 2020 3:54am
You convey that feeling well. I loved a girl once that only ever wanted that and I failed to give it to her. Its a tragedy when one never gets the love they need yet offers it fully.
17th Mar 2020 7:24pm
20th Mar 2020 00:54am
24th Apr 2020 4:21am
Ouch :(
I feel your pain. Although it was very sad, it was beautifully worded.
Thank you for sharing with us!
I feel your pain. Although it was very sad, it was beautifully worded.
Thank you for sharing with us!
