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Passerby
In my passing,
please do not light a candle for me.
you can not illuminate emotions
or hide the dark of sad
that longs to
take hold and
stay…
Prior to all of
Please do not blow
out the flame,
the glow,
of love -
the emotional flow
between spaces.
I opt for no....
longing to Feel
a way without crusted eyes
blinded by tears of woe.
Personally, my Past is in the past. I am looking forward, & moving.
As I take this first step
through the archway to the stars
it is with hope of events to come,
a resolve which will no longer
be fueled with seasoned tears
& may be open for interpretation.
please do not light a candle for me.
you can not illuminate emotions
or hide the dark of sad
that longs to
take hold and
stay…
Prior to all of
Please do not blow
out the flame,
the glow,
of love -
the emotional flow
between spaces.
I opt for no....
longing to Feel
a way without crusted eyes
blinded by tears of woe.
Personally, my Past is in the past. I am looking forward, & moving.
As I take this first step
through the archway to the stars
it is with hope of events to come,
a resolve which will no longer
be fueled with seasoned tears
& may be open for interpretation.
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Re. Passerby
1st Dec 2018 5:38am
Great poetic muse, enjoyed the lil paradox of not lighting a candle yet to not blow out the flame' which makes the poem interesting and superb. Kudos.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and it's ok if you comment or add your thoughts or if you don't. Just like exchange of thoughts and meeting new poets
Pleez do read my newest poem too and it's ok if you comment or add your thoughts or if you don't. Just like exchange of thoughts and meeting new poets
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1st Dec 2018 5:44am
I never blow out candle flames.
I use a shot glass to put out the flames.
I think it's a habit from when I do (witchcraft)
rituals.
Thank You for stopping by to read and share with me.
& Yes, I will read Your ink......... :)
I use a shot glass to put out the flames.
I think it's a habit from when I do (witchcraft)
rituals.
Thank You for stopping by to read and share with me.
& Yes, I will read Your ink......... :)
Re. Passerby
1st Dec 2018 6:00am
To move on without looking to the past
Somethings ya just gotta let be
Just an observation
Somethings ya just gotta let be
Just an observation
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1st Dec 2018 6:03am
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1st Dec 2018 12:07pm
Challenging, emotive ink. Extremely well phrased. Enjoyed the reading of this one.
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1st Dec 2018 5:09pm
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1st Dec 2018 10:29pm
This is what I'm talking about Tallen. Your emotion radiate in your writing. Great work!
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