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Pussy Poetics
your erotica stains my thoughts
creamy dot, dot, dot
pink peeking revealing velvet folds
finds tips tracing figure eights
then plunging in candied hole
sweet delectable adjectives
igniting dreams
burns the landscape of my imaginations
lusty verbs with hardened intentions
arouse the vixen in me
I play with myself
picturing you before me
steely eyes undressing your playmate
rosy buds stand at attention
when the Mistress and Master
cum forth from the shadows
a soft kiss is all it takes
my pleasure zones awaken
and I beg to taste
sweet blackberry flavor
the fun has just begun
as you watch on amused at the foreplay
lady love is in full swing
you finger first one then the other
savoring our combined tastes
you command me to suck you
I lick, swirl, spit on your head
then go deep taking you all in
while my Mistress massages my clit
you growl "don't cum no, not yet"
I look up at you with pleading blue eyes
with a giggle, the lady builds in intensity
as a mixture of pain and ecstasy rolls over me
you enter darkness greed with your rod of steel
and dip, dive, and swirl
my pink little lolita
grips the head of your cock
you moan with pleasure
and dive to the bottom
while my Mistress suckles my breasts
sending me to the edge of oblivion
one last plunge and I begin pulsating
naughty girl
creaming up and down your rock hard member
you slap my heart shaped ass
for cumming without permission
sending me into creamy spasms
I beg for your cum deep inside me
with restraint, you withdraw from wet pink
winking at my Mistress you cum in her face
while cream drips from her cunt
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30th Nov 2018 11:14pm
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2018 11:14pm
Brenda.. this boils erotica, so fucking seductive.. brilliant ink.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
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1st Dec 2018 1:49pm
giggles thank you dearest Dave my brother you gifted me smiles with your response...
love you...
Brenda 🌹
love you...
Brenda 🌹
Re. Pussy Poetics
30th Nov 2018 11:14pm
Fuck yes! Loving this carnal challenge you present. Dripping in all the right spots. An exquisite horny write that is definitely engaging more than my mind right now. Vicariously pleased! ;) x
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1st Dec 2018 1:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One i'm over the moon from your response...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
Re: Re. Pussy Poetics
1st Dec 2018 2:44pm
That excitement carried me through the day. You sparked quite a fire in me! Bad girl! ;)
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1st Dec 2018 2:46pm
aw thank you dearest Tender One I'm so happy to hear this poem affected you reading the way it did me writing it 😈
giggles...
love Brenda 💕
giggles...
love Brenda 💕
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1st Dec 2018 3:09pm
Those are the best writes. And the more you linger in it, the more spills out. ;)
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1st Dec 2018 3:10pm
that's true I like to let those feeling build through the day before I write an erotic 💕
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1st Dec 2018 3:14pm
I so agree with that philosophy. Let it build until you can't take it anymore.
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2018 11:26pm
Hi Crimmy,
My cranium just exploded.
Have a great day!
Matthew.
PS. *Wow!*
My cranium just exploded.
Have a great day!
Matthew.
PS. *Wow!*
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1st Dec 2018 1:51pm
giggles thank you dearest Matthew so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 💋
love Brenda 💋
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 2:30pm
•You're amazing my friend!
Hey, hand me that frontal lobe, will you? I'm just going to piece this skull together quick. Lol.•
Love you.
Matthew.
Hey, hand me that frontal lobe, will you? I'm just going to piece this skull together quick. Lol.•
Love you.
Matthew.
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1st Dec 2018 2:31pm
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 2:35pm
God, that's nice to hear.
You're so great.
Love you, too, always.
Matthew.
You're so great.
Love you, too, always.
Matthew.
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1st Dec 2018 00:02am
I agree wholeheartedly with Dave, sister. This piece is radically sexy and liberating! It leaves your readers pegging for more! Brilliantly well written.
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1st Dec 2018 1:52pm
thank you beautiful Velvet I'm beaming from your comment so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 00:13am
Oh my god what just happened here?! This just sent me in spasm mode! I love every dripping moment of it. My dearest Brenda this is of such delicious beauty that I can't but say I am in awe! Fantastic my Divine mistress of poetry. Hugs and love to you. J
P. S. I need to free some space on my RL. This is a masterpiece!
P. S. I need to free some space on my RL. This is a masterpiece!
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1st Dec 2018 1:54pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis I'm so happy you found this stimulating as I was writing it... I"m smiling wide from your comment...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
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1st Dec 2018 00:24am
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1st Dec 2018 1:55pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence I'm happy you found this arousingly stimulating...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Pussy Poetics
1st Dec 2018 3:30am
Very erotic sensual passionate lust sex...imagery running wild in one's mind...stimulating and pleasurable my dear....excellent,,,😊🌹🐺
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1st Dec 2018 1:56pm
thank you graciously dearest Wolfman I'm so happy an erotic writer such as yourself found this pleasurable...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st Dec 2018 2:26pm
1st Dec 2018 3:52am
My girl has gone and done it again...oh my love, how you can make me twitch 😉 - I love you
Always and forever
Xoxo Taryn
Always and forever
Xoxo Taryn
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1st Dec 2018 1:58pm
aw thank you my beautiful one I love you so much this write had me thinking of us 😈
I love you 💕
love Brenda 🌹
I love you 💕
love Brenda 🌹
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1st Dec 2018 4:14am
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 9:45am
Brenda, you are a very talented writer but this one, takes the cake.
Erotic.
Sexy.
Alluring.
Unbelievably well done
Erotic.
Sexy.
Alluring.
Unbelievably well done
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1st Dec 2018 2:00pm
aw thank you dearest Ragnar your comment honors me greatly... I'm so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
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1st Dec 2018 11:29am
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1st Dec 2018 2:00pm
giggles thank you Lyrical One I could definitely see you there...
love Brenda 😈
love Brenda 😈
Re. Pussy Poetics
1st Dec 2018 12:53pm
By personifying each succulent body part, you become an army of sensual parts coordinating a seduction.
The balance of control and out of control becomes a focal point.
How independently do those individual parts assert themselves? Can one part overpower another?
In some ways, our bodies control us....and some parts control the entire body....complex...
The balance of control and out of control becomes a focal point.
How independently do those individual parts assert themselves? Can one part overpower another?
In some ways, our bodies control us....and some parts control the entire body....complex...
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1st Dec 2018 2:02pm
thank you dearest RT you know it's funny I didn't even notice I did that in this write personifying the body parts I do that so often in my writing it's just natural now... I'm so happy this was pleasing to you...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
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1st Dec 2018 1:05pm
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1st Dec 2018 2:04pm
giggles you have no idea lol...aw well thank you dearest Dark Sun I know a man of great pleasure and I see that in you...
I'm so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 😈
I'm so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 😈
Re. Pussy Poetics
1st Dec 2018 10:03pm
You're on a roll with the erotica, Brenda. Your poetics give me quite a lift...
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3rd Dec 2018 8:11pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
4th Feb 2019 7:47pm
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