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Gypsy Moth
( a Quatern )
The fluttering of powdered gypsy wings
Is what a sleeping lover dreams about.
While lying still to listen as moth sings,
To feel her loving touches acted out.
To cast off cares & woes this peaceful stay,
The fluttering of powdered gypsy wings.
To fill lungs sweetest breath to pass the day,
The carefree of a heart is what she brings.
Alights each rise of air like plucking strings,
To sigh as tender dance upon sex plays.
The fluttering of powdered gypsy wings
Will let her pearl & kiss a body’s maze.
And soon a lover’s heat becomes a moan,
Till sound of mounting groans begin to ring.
A sudden shower falls before she’s flown,
The fluttering of powdered gypsy wings.
Published 25th Nov 2018
Author's Note
shower = release
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25th Nov 2018 6:17pm
sweet loving write
sent of lust there with flutter of wings
as morning groans
sent of lust there with flutter of wings
as morning groans
25th Nov 2018 6:22pm
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25th Nov 2018 10:59pm
First rate eroticism, Jadey. It has a beauty and subtlety to it and is replete with class. Your "Gypsy Moth" takes flight, and does so in quatern form.
26th Nov 2018 9:24am
Gosh my dear crowfly friend, I’m practically speechless from your timeless journalist’s manners & lingo. You truly were and still are able to show how you did it, and it’s an honor. Thank you, Thomas.
Jadey🦋
Jadey🦋
Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 00:53am
i swear...your talent is so profound..
you've given me the inspiration to try my hand at this form
you've given me the inspiration to try my hand at this form
26th Nov 2018 9:34am
Oh thank you, Naajir, so very much. How dear if you. Others have been like-inspired, and I’m just so honored & humble. And I’m glad you like my little ‘tern’.
Jade🦋
Jade🦋
Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 2:25am
Beautiful Jadey!
Queen Quatern strikes again!
You have such a wonderful way with words my friend. I could just melt in your poetry.
Keep it up Kiddo.
Love,
Matthew.
Queen Quatern strikes again!
You have such a wonderful way with words my friend. I could just melt in your poetry.
Keep it up Kiddo.
Love,
Matthew.
26th Nov 2018 9:46am
Thank you, Matthew, for your enthusiastic appreciation of my latest ‘tern’, so very kind of you. I just do what I love doing. I guess I’m lucky that way, but I’ve also written almost nonstop for years.
Jadey🦋
Jadey🦋
26th Nov 2018 7:48pm
Well executed, the message flows through the form organically, carrying desire, unity, release. Enjoyed this.
Daniel
Daniel
Daniel, thank you immensely for stopping by for a read. And for your insight of words that give me a nice spot to settle in. I appreciate how you share with me.
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Jade🦋
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Jade🦋
1st Dec 2018 11:49am
Thank you so very much, dear je’... & such an honor to see you here.
RL gratitude
Jade🦋
RL gratitude
Jade🦋
