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ODE TO V.I.P. ADULT BOUTIQUE SALESLADY
We interacted for a moment brief
The imprint on my soul defied belief
(As homely girl without much competence
Took over sales request to my offense)
Although I'm told it's impolite to stare
My brain and eyes distracted searched for where
Your graceful countenance had floated to
My goal in this endeavor switched to you
Now V.I.P. is where I go to find
The gorgeous one who dominates my mind
The imprint on my soul defied belief
(As homely girl without much competence
Took over sales request to my offense)
Although I'm told it's impolite to stare
My brain and eyes distracted searched for where
Your graceful countenance had floated to
My goal in this endeavor switched to you
Now V.I.P. is where I go to find
The gorgeous one who dominates my mind
Published 20th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Maybe I'll include this as a secret admirer note with a delivered bouquet of flowers. I'm thinking stargazer lillies.
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20th Nov 2018 00:54am
(i'd) Go for it!
This happens all the time
and we never know what it the catalyst
(when we don't -- go for it -- because we don't have this experience to share)
This happens all the time
and we never know what it the catalyst
(when we don't -- go for it -- because we don't have this experience to share)
20th Nov 2018 6:00am
Not shy. I don't respond all the time because I view comments as a place to discuss the poems.
20th Nov 2018 6:09am
