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Vexed
a pretty face is all you're after
you climb in her tree
a serpent looking for his Eve
beguiling with flattering eyes
soft words lined with razors
cutting...
without the innocent even being aware
I see you slithering around
she has barely touched ground
and is already bearing your seed
seducer of the mind
vexer over spirit
I've seen it all before
it always plays out the same
...with the broken hearted
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Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:08pm
hm erotic...
it always plays out the same
...with the broken hearted
Perplexed didn't know what to make of these two "finalizers"
Liked, of course
it always plays out the same
...with the broken hearted
Perplexed didn't know what to make of these two "finalizers"
Liked, of course
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:13pm
thank you beautiful Nari I'm a little frustrated today... I feel we are here to write... it seems others are here to date... being already broken hearted it never ends well i've seen it too many times in my eight years here...
with a few exceptions of course...
thank you for being here beautiful lady...
love Brenda 💕
with a few exceptions of course...
thank you for being here beautiful lady...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:15pm
Dating- well some of us would make the ultimate partners according to some of these writings; that's neither here nor there but...Well everyone has an agenda and we're not all on the same page with it. That's life.
Thank you for being profound today.
Love,
Nari
Thank you for being profound today.
Love,
Nari
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:24pm
if I was honest perhaps it is a little jealousy over a poet I am fond of but he is what he is and makes no bones about it... he has a new face...
thank you beautiful for being you...
love Brenda 💕
thank you beautiful for being you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Vexed
Anonymous
16th Nov 2018 2:21pm
See, now I'm oblivious to that nonsense. I come here for the poetry, the inspiration and for release. Not necessarily in that order. I think I'll just keep my head down, now that you've pointed it out so creatively, my beautiful Dark Angel. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:37pm
I understand beautiful one I have a certain affinity towards certain poets and my jealous bone gets tickled from time to time...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Vexed
Anonymous
16th Nov 2018 2:43pm
My sweet one, it's the game of seduction. Life is such, I'm afraid. But it should always be a game of giving and taking freely, without imposition or unnecessary abuse. Love you truly, my sweet friend. J
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:47pm
I know my dearest Juvenalis but please understand this about me I get jealous over those I love...however that being said a little rejection is good for me I'm a little masochistic...
I love you my friend...
love Brenda ❤
I love you my friend...
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. Vexed
Anonymous
16th Nov 2018 2:55pm
And your jealousy is so sweet to my heart. To reject you is so stupid. Those that do so must be mentally castrated. Forgive the use of such term. But it is what I think. I love you too sweet one. Hugs J
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 2:58pm
dear one I've not been rejected as a masochist you know pain is my pleasure...
thank you for showing me love in return...
❤💕❤💕
thank you for showing me love in return...
❤💕❤💕
Re: Re. Vexed
Anonymous
16th Nov 2018 3:14pm
I know sweet one. I meant that it would be foolish to reject the love you have to offer. No person, in the right state of mind, could be so foolish. I do understand your masochistic pleasure. Hugs J
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Re: Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 3:25pm
Anonymous
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16th Nov 2018 3:51pm
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Re. Vexed
16th Nov 2018 4:13pm
We like the piece full of pain but we enjoyed, sometimes pain makes you smarter and stronger
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Re. Vexed
Anonymous
16th Nov 2018 9:25pm
Brenda.. soul sister of mine.. really spilling some great ink lately.. as always, i'm in awe of you.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Vexed
17th Nov 2018 1:18am
Love the poem, so well writtin' and true but such is life and heartbreak a playground for us poets and songwriters.
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Re. Vexed
17th Nov 2018 2:39pm
Re. Vexed
18th Nov 2018 00:07am
"Seducer of the mind." It's you, not the serpent, who has me in thrall. As always, I love your lines, Brenda.
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
19th Nov 2018 11:33am
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