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Corpse
you crossed me
fucked with my head
then tossed me
cut me
played with my womanhood
and molested me
I hurt you, I hunt you
sucked your cock
then dumped you
soul chaser, pain bringer
you inspired my sin
in my dark days brought me death
I felt your greed
despised your need
embryonic musings left me cold
I scoffed at your nonsense
hell yes, I laughed
you turned my head once
but the same old song
found me bored
one hit wonder
touched the stars
just to crash back to Earth
here in outer space, I don't hear you
in truth, I just don't feel you
is it any wonder
it could all be said of me
stale passions fail to satisfy
laying with a corpse
a cold, dead fuck
is what you feel
when you touch me
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18th Nov 2018 2:23pm
Re. Corpse
Anonymous
18th Nov 2018 2:33pm
This is a great 'fuck you' poem Bren. My kind of writing lol. Rob
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18th Nov 2018 2:36pm
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20th Nov 2018 2:54pm
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18th Nov 2018 3:36pm
Some venom in this write. But provides a perfect amount of sting. Well done.
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20th Nov 2018 2:55pm
Re. Corpse
18th Nov 2018 4:20pm
Emotions conveyed in full to the reader...embryonic musings left me cold..profound, liked check box
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20th Nov 2018 2:57pm
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20th Nov 2018 2:58pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for the love on this darkened scribe...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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18th Nov 2018 6:14pm
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20th Nov 2018 2:58pm
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18th Nov 2018 9:39pm
I love it when you're this fierce, Brenda. You turn a cold shoulder to a man who richly deserves it. Far be it from me to fuck with your head. Superb write!
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Re: Re. Corpse
20th Nov 2018 2:59pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for the love on this write...
love Brenda 😈
love Brenda 😈
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19th Nov 2018 5:24am
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20th Nov 2018 2:59pm
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19th Nov 2018 6:01am
Keep ranting Brenda...this is therapeutic for you surely, but it helps us relate our injuries <3
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Re: Re. Corpse
20th Nov 2018 3:00pm
thank you beautiful Atomik One yeah it needs to come out somewhere right?
I hope it helps others...
love Brenda 💕
I hope it helps others...
love Brenda 💕
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19th Nov 2018 9:29am
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20th Nov 2018 3:01pm
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 5:54pm
Don't mess with my friend, Crimmy! Or there's going to be hell to pay!
Loved it, my friend. So deep, and angry, and heart felt.
You're the best.
Love,
Matthew.
Loved it, my friend. So deep, and angry, and heart felt.
You're the best.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Corpse
20th Nov 2018 3:02pm
aw giggles dearest Matthew thank you but really I'm a softy...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2018 3:22pm
I know you are, my friend, but you're cute when you're poetically angry. lol.
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Re. Corpse
19th Nov 2018 10:15pm
And sometimes it just be this way...... The reality of it all...... Nice spill hun....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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Re: Re. Corpse
20th Nov 2018 3:03pm
thank you beautiful Savvy One yeah it does I feel guilty when I vent like this...
I deeply appreciate your understanding...
love Brenda ✨
I deeply appreciate your understanding...
love Brenda ✨