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The Last Words of a Crow
By the moonlight I strolled
Along a path freshly mowed
Winding ‘round a cat-tailed pond
When I saw the shadow of a Crow
In this cold midnight hour
Her silk-black feathers glowed
She turned her eye on me
And in that moment she spoke:
“Bluebird, my darling
The last time I saw you
Spring’s flowers still bloomed
A brilliant bright yellow
Now you know who I am
And where I have travelled
And I’ll keep looking after you
Wherever you may go.”
My heart sang back to she
Notes carried upon the wind
And I know she’s always watching
Dearest Aunt Sandy, the Crow
#RobertFrost
Written by
nightbirdblue
Published 15th Nov 2018
Author's Note
For Sandra Erline Ferris 🕊
8/31/1950 - 5/28/2013
8/31/1950 - 5/28/2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The Last Words of a Crow
Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 9:12pm
I was drawn by the title (very Ted Hughes) and the poignant words didn't disappoint. Good write.
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Re: Re. The Last Words of a Crow
16th Nov 2018 7:31pm
Thank you! This was inspired by Robert Frost’s poem “The Last Word of a Bluebird” for JohnnyBlaze’s comp...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10474/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10474/
Re. The Last Words of a Crow
15th Nov 2018 9:13pm
What a wonderful 'Robert Frost' style poem - it really captures a feel of his writing. Best of luck in the comp.
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16th Nov 2018 7:32pm
Re. The Last Words of a Crow
Gem you've truly captured the essence of Frost's poem in this. Birds are often messengers from beyond, and I have such an affinity for crows. Well done.
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
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Re: Re. The Last Words of a Crow
16th Nov 2018 7:35pm
I’m glad I could do it justice, this is actually based on real events and so Frost’s poem was chillingly perfect...
Thank you!
Thank you!
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Re: Re. The Last Words of a Crow
16th Nov 2018 7:36pm
Quite certainly, love never dies. I’m enjoying leaning more about iconic poets!
Re. The Last Words of a Crow
Anonymous
17th Nov 2018 3:27pm
Good luck in the competition.
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17th Nov 2018 4:18pm
Re. The Last Words of a Crow
18th Nov 2018 2:15am
Beautiful and reverent spirit flows through your writing here. It's a touching tribute.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re. The Last Words of a Crow
7th Dec 2018 2:26pm
I always admired these birds and they are very smart birds I have been watching them a long time...I can name some birds that are extinct who once lived here in Indiana...I haven't seen a small bluebird for several years and not many blue jays
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7th Dec 2018 6:15pm
I’ve admired birds from a young age. The Crow has spoken to myself and family members on several occasions with the voice of our departed relative, my Aunt Sandy.
That’s so sad that you haven’t seen bluebirds or many bluejays for so long, I see them both regularly in Michigan. Seeing rare birds has always inspired me, I hope you see one soon.
That’s so sad that you haven’t seen bluebirds or many bluejays for so long, I see them both regularly in Michigan. Seeing rare birds has always inspired me, I hope you see one soon.