morning

I would like to read the poem, but am having trouble reading it with the font and the picture. Would you mind putting it in the comments? Thanks.

Thanks for your observation, NewBeginnings.  You are right:  many of these picture poems cannot be easily read.  They would be more accessible, if Admin gave us the option to zoom in on a page.  What I will do now and in the future is provide a public link to all my picture poems.  Here's the link for "morning" (just copy-paste it into your browser):

http://mydo.cx/NWI0ZDUz

Thanks for your interest.

Wow! I'm glad that I inquired about that. Honestly, to me, this poem is one of the best poems I have read on this site. Why? I think the poem is extremely well-written, with interesting vocabulary, and a plethora of poetic techniques incorporated. It's just very well thought out.

I especially liked your use of the homonyms (pray/prey), the frequent (but not excessive) alliteration to aid the flow, and the wonderful symbolism. Not only is the poem appealing from a technical standpoint, but from an emotional standpoint as well. It reminds me anxiety and depression; some nights, I feel like the 'light' is locked away, and that darkness will overtake me. Nevertheless, it never does, and I always seem to come back to my senses and find my way back to the light.

Thank you so much for sharing! It is a shame that it's so hard to read on the actual website or honestly I think you would probably have received more feedback. Bravo, once again! You're an incredible writer!

I am most indebted to you for taking time to consider the possible merits of my "morning" work.  Your technical analysis betrays your own poetic expertise.

Thanks again, for your encouragement.  I shall be checking out your writing in a little while!