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In The Arms Of A Stranger
You wanted all of me
So I resisted
You wanted control
So I gave you a chance to take it
You drug your'e hands through my hair
I screamed in agony
Pleasure and pain
The line separating has been faded for me
Erased for you
My lungs scream for air
This is what they say is love
To lay down ones life for another
A knife splays my body open to youre eyes
Giving you acess to my inner most self
For if you fail to capture my mind
I will let you lock my body into yours
Slip into me
My fear gives way
My tears are pouring
Save me
I can breathe now.
I know you aren't going to feed mr lies
Telling me it's ok when it's not
I finally feel safe.
In the arms of a stranger.
So I resisted
You wanted control
So I gave you a chance to take it
You drug your'e hands through my hair
I screamed in agony
Pleasure and pain
The line separating has been faded for me
Erased for you
My lungs scream for air
This is what they say is love
To lay down ones life for another
A knife splays my body open to youre eyes
Giving you acess to my inner most self
For if you fail to capture my mind
I will let you lock my body into yours
Slip into me
My fear gives way
My tears are pouring
Save me
I can breathe now.
I know you aren't going to feed mr lies
Telling me it's ok when it's not
I finally feel safe.
In the arms of a stranger.
Author's Note
This is not normally as morbid and twisted as I get with things but oh well....My muses blood splattered the paper...
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Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
15th Nov 2018 9:48am
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17th Nov 2018 6:24pm
Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
15th Nov 2018 5:59pm
Inspired by the line "A knife splays my body open to youre eyes ":
I am sliced
Down the middle
Steam pours
Out of me there
Eat me hot
If you can take it!
I am sliced
Down the middle
Steam pours
Out of me there
Eat me hot
If you can take it!
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17th Nov 2018 6:24pm
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17th Nov 2018 6:46pm
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17th Nov 2018 10:28pm
Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
16th Nov 2018 9:42am
Great write I'd like to read something from your truly morbid and twisted mind but this is a great taste of things.
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17th Nov 2018 6:25pm
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19th Nov 2018 5:02am
Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
18th Nov 2018 9:45pm
Found it difficult to wrap my head around. I'm sure it's me not you, though.
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Re: Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
19th Nov 2018 5:01am
I appreciate the feedback, thank you so much! And to be honest, the subject itself is really not everyones cup of tea...
Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
19th Nov 2018 3:12pm
Nice dark write. Not my normal fare but there is a little of this inside us all at times :)
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22nd Nov 2018 10:14am
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16th Dec 2018 2:10pm
Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
2nd Jun 2019 4:04pm
You make me feel like that stranger
then I realize that I will never feel like that]
your words move me
then I realize that I will never feel like that]
your words move me
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Re. In The Arms Of A Stranger
25th Mar 2024 00:13am
It's an honest write with some of the sensual undertones that make it very palpable.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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