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Cellular
On the inside
there's a three months waiting list
to get a part time job
which means we spend
twenty three hours a day
seven days a week
locked up in pajamas
with two strangers
in an eight by ten
every second counted
& the greater the boredom
the more exciting crime will seem
come the day of our release
Published 7th Nov 2011
| Edited 26th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2011 6:26pm
The title of this poem is nicely playful. Here I was expecting an attack on mobile phones when prison reared its head. The "pyjamas" were an exquisite touch and the central wisdom is refreshingly intelligent. I shan't ask how you know about the three month waiting period for part time work in the nick. Thanks for the read, Abra.
8th Nov 2011 9:23am
I know about it because I listen to the news, Jack & have the poet's habit of remembering trivial snippets of information for future use.
Thanks for your kind words.
Best ~ Abra
Thanks for your kind words.
Best ~ Abra
