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You (My Muse)
You.
You’re my addiction.
You.
You’re my obsession.
You.
Awaiting your next masterpiece,
Dreaming of your next thought,
Clinging to every word.
You.
Wondering what you're doing,
Pondering your feelings, your ideals,
Imagining how you might look.
You.
Control me.
You.
Demand my attention.
You.
Without ever truly knowing me,
Or knowing each other’s touch,
Are somehow, more intimate than lovers.
You.
Are my inspiration,
Fuel for my imagination.
You.
My muse.
You’re my addiction.
You.
You’re my obsession.
You.
Awaiting your next masterpiece,
Dreaming of your next thought,
Clinging to every word.
You.
Wondering what you're doing,
Pondering your feelings, your ideals,
Imagining how you might look.
You.
Control me.
You.
Demand my attention.
You.
Without ever truly knowing me,
Or knowing each other’s touch,
Are somehow, more intimate than lovers.
You.
Are my inspiration,
Fuel for my imagination.
You.
My muse.
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Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 10:28am
Really love the structure of this ... the drumming repetition of "You" ... the mix of short and long stanzas ... great emoting/evoking ... the desire is relentless ... sustained ... I feel it with each line ... I also love how it shifts to writing inspiration at the end ... bravo my poet ...
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 12:01pm
Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 10:56am
Indeed, love is a true addiction the symptoms of withdrawal that can be devastating.
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 12:03pm
Thank you for commenting, you clearly have suffered the same affliction of adoration - both balm and ailment.
Re. You (My Muse)
Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 12:22pm
Beautiful to be so inspired, I hope you continue to embrace it all. Soak it all up.
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 12:26pm
Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 1:56pm
The mighty muse. Envelopes us with rapture until it saunters away, leaving us cold until the next spark. Terrific piece.
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 6:39pm
Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 2:53pm
dearest RJM powerful verse
I'm really feeling the deep desire here...
so passionately expressed...
love Brenda ❤
I'm really feeling the deep desire here...
so passionately expressed...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 6:41pm
The desire and passion are both strong for my muse. Thanks for commenting and the RL.
Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 10:14pm
I echo LilDragonFly;s comment. I love the structure, the repetition of "You", and the wording. First rate work!
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Re: Re. You (My Muse)
13th Nov 2018 11:02pm