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Destiny
my feelings in a Gordian knot
I trace my fingers over these tangled thoughts
saying my own personal mantra
this one for my past I can't seem to resolve
one strand for the little girl lost inside me
a tight chord for my insecurities
future me is there standing proud
beaming at me with tears in her eyes
adorned in love and passion
she says
"run to me it's time to shine
shed the rags, tattered and torn
of the shame you carry"
"lady why hang your head?
when I've set up a meeting
people are eager to greet you
with understanding and knowledge
come off the ledge of confusion and self-hate"
"I know you intimately
I know you're ready
to step into my shoes
and fulfill your destiny"
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Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 3:50pm
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11th Nov 2018 4:13pm
Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 3:51pm
"run to me it's time to shine
shed the rags, tattered and torn
of the shame you carry"
hmpf you are so romantic about suffering; aren't we all at this age?
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shed the rags, tattered and torn
of the shame you carry"
hmpf you are so romantic about suffering; aren't we all at this age?
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thank you beautiful Nari for understanding... this write arises from me considering joining the poet's society here in town if I do I might start reading my poetry to people in hospice and senior centers... it's exciting to me but there's a part of me that fears my past makes me not good enough...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful lady...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you beautiful lady...
love Brenda 🌹
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11th Nov 2018 6:00pm
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 4:06pm
This is a motherload of beautiful inspiration.
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Re: Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 4:16pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Ragnar you made my morning shine...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
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11th Nov 2018 4:15pm
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11th Nov 2018 4:17pm
thank you graciously dearest RJM for such a wonderful comment gifting me smiles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 4:29pm
This is wonderful really relatable👏
"come off the ledge of confusion and self-hate" powerful line, sounds like me
"come off the ledge of confusion and self-hate" powerful line, sounds like me
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Re: Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 4:36pm
thank you dearest Hunter for understanding... may we embrace beauty...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 5:15pm
Achingly gorgeous write poetess, the reflections and encouragement you speak of are a healthy spoonful of self-love. I believe in you <3
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12th Nov 2018 12:45pm
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 6:23pm
And shine you will, my beautiful Dark Angel. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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12th Nov 2018 12:49pm
thank you beautiful Willow for your continued love and support...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 7:00pm
Your words will be a stimulus to those in need and a proof that one can truly make their destiny. Beautiful you are in words and in heart. Hugs and love. J
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Re: Re. Destiny
12th Nov 2018 12:50pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis for such a visionary comment...with all I am I hope it comes to be...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 9:05pm
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12th Nov 2018 12:51pm
Re. Destiny
11th Nov 2018 11:04pm
I read your reply about your past maybe not making you good enough. It makes you one of the best. You've had a hard life, which you have transformed into wonderful writing, cathartic and at times a revelation to the reader. You're equally capable of confessional writes, dark fantasy and celebration of beauty. If anything, you're destined for the stars.
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Re: Re. Destiny
12th Nov 2018 12:52pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I love your vision of me...perhaps you are right... I just want to do some good in this life...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 11:56pm
My God, you're a wonderful writer, Crimmy!!
You're an inspiration to us all, and a beautiful soul.
Shine bright, young lady!!
Love,
Matthew.
You're an inspiration to us all, and a beautiful soul.
Shine bright, young lady!!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Destiny
12th Nov 2018 12:53pm
aw thank you dearest Matthew you bring me smiles every day I hope I do the same for you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2018 8:54pm
Every day, Crimmy.
I think of you, and your kindness more than you know.
Love,
Matthew.
I think of you, and your kindness more than you know.
Love,
Matthew.
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