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...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
yet the paper
he chose
an invisible one
nothing hidden
yet nothing seen
written and gone
in sands between
the waves
he saves
his poems
at sea
they carry them deep
forever's to keep
and he is happy
that way
poetry
not always
for the audience
some messages
are better off
in perpetual journey
beneath the earth
in the air
or at
sea
he chose
an invisible one
nothing hidden
yet nothing seen
written and gone
in sands between
the waves
he saves
his poems
at sea
they carry them deep
forever's to keep
and he is happy
that way
poetry
not always
for the audience
some messages
are better off
in perpetual journey
beneath the earth
in the air
or at
sea
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Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 5:04pm
Cold One,
My honest critique is: that is fantastic!! Damn you write well!!
Loved that!
I like your writing style, too. Some people on here have unique styles, and yours is one. You have those short paragraph thingy's(yes, that's poetic talk!), and they convey so much meaning!
Fantastic, my friend!
MZ.
My honest critique is: that is fantastic!! Damn you write well!!
Loved that!
I like your writing style, too. Some people on here have unique styles, and yours is one. You have those short paragraph thingy's(yes, that's poetic talk!), and they convey so much meaning!
Fantastic, my friend!
MZ.
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 5:11pm
welcome
dear Matthew
you humbled me to no end there
these are just ramblings of a madman and THAT is the honest truth!
it is the warmth and affection
the peers and Friends here honor them with
is truly humbling and honoring at the same time.
thank you will never go that far to express my gratitude to all!
dear Matthew
you humbled me to no end there
these are just ramblings of a madman and THAT is the honest truth!
it is the warmth and affection
the peers and Friends here honor them with
is truly humbling and honoring at the same time.
thank you will never go that far to express my gratitude to all!
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 5:17pm
"written and gone
in sands between
the waves
he saves
his poems
at sea"
... nothing is lost in the cosmos. Great write.
in sands between
the waves
he saves
his poems
at sea"
... nothing is lost in the cosmos. Great write.
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 5:56pm
welcome Josh!
dear poet admired!
humbled me dear Friend..with the honor.
you nailed it...the raison d'être
the essence of this scribble
my appreciation
beyond words
dear poet admired!
humbled me dear Friend..with the honor.
you nailed it...the raison d'être
the essence of this scribble
my appreciation
beyond words
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 5:25pm
This reads with a really nice flow. I enjoyed the content. Sometimes we need to put our pen to paper for ourselves. It can be soothing.
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 6:00pm
welcome
is the Poet admired
welcome
is the review kind
and generous
glad is a small word
to describe joy
it made sense, the scribble
yes, indeed sometimes that is the case
my quote on my profile... re inking the expression, same.
there is universal agreement about the therapeutic, soothing, healing nature of poetry. This but one such example.
appreciation
immense
is the Poet admired
welcome
is the review kind
and generous
glad is a small word
to describe joy
it made sense, the scribble
yes, indeed sometimes that is the case
my quote on my profile... re inking the expression, same.
there is universal agreement about the therapeutic, soothing, healing nature of poetry. This but one such example.
appreciation
immense
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 5:25pm
Inspiration can not be found, regardless of how hard one tries. It comes when we are least expecting, when the mind is left open and it is then we are taken from the now into the Zone.
This is a beautiful trip into your Zone, brother.
Thank You for the invite.
This is a beautiful trip into your Zone, brother.
Thank You for the invite.
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 6:03pm
welcome
is The Poetess admired
welcome
(to the zone) is The Friend!
also welcome, is the kindness and affection and not the least the humbling generosity of the wise Friend.
couldn't agree with you more and am sure same is the case with most of our peers here re the futility of chasing inspiration Sis.
gratitude
beyond words
:-)
is The Poetess admired
welcome
(to the zone) is The Friend!
also welcome, is the kindness and affection and not the least the humbling generosity of the wise Friend.
couldn't agree with you more and am sure same is the case with most of our peers here re the futility of chasing inspiration Sis.
gratitude
beyond words
:-)
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 6:55pm
The secrets of oneself may deny the blessings of others around you. the choice is yours?
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
23rd Oct 2018 7:00pm
some tragedies are better hidden amongst the elements. well posed question dear Poet.
welcome
both your presence
and your insight
welcome
both your presence
and your insight
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
24th Oct 2018 5:44am
absolutely feeling soothed & stroked..
god, love how your ink glides beyond then into us
god, love how your ink glides beyond then into us
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
25th Oct 2018 9:38am
welcome
dear Ms Noire
welcome
also
is your generous and kind review.
joy
and pleasure
is all the inker's
scribble made sense.
appreciation
beyond words
dear Ms Noire
welcome
also
is your generous and kind review.
joy
and pleasure
is all the inker's
scribble made sense.
appreciation
beyond words
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
26th Oct 2018 3:07pm
that last stanza just sums it up so magnificently!
like a story that never ends, just ebbs and flows
like a story that never ends, just ebbs and flows
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
26th Oct 2018 3:47pm
welcome
is the peer admired
firstly to the community
that is Du
as well as
to the scribble
appreciate immensely
the visit
the kind insight and the review generous
well some pages burning, some tablets ground
best way to keep the message in
its journey
is the peer admired
firstly to the community
that is Du
as well as
to the scribble
appreciate immensely
the visit
the kind insight and the review generous
well some pages burning, some tablets ground
best way to keep the message in
its journey
Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
26th Oct 2018 4:02pm
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Re: Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
29th Oct 2018 11:39am
welcome
is the peer
firstly to the community that is Du
as well as
to the scribble
also welcome
is the appreciation & review
kind and generous
appreciate all
immensely
is the peer
firstly to the community that is Du
as well as
to the scribble
also welcome
is the appreciation & review
kind and generous
appreciate all
immensely
Re. ...and he wrote poems with an indelible ink
5th Nov 2018 8:17pm
I have some of those as well... messages stuffed into bottles thrown into the vast blue waters, floating through perpetual time for no greater mission than the release.
Though the thought is shared, the form is uniquely yours. Love your ink my friend, as always.
Though the thought is shared, the form is uniquely yours. Love your ink my friend, as always.
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11th Oct 2019 3:56pm
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