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Acceptance My Response
.
Leave egotistical thoughts
behind,
Take me by the hand,
pull me close as my
eyes meet yours, so
I might see what you
see is true,
Kiss me softly, so I might
show my acceptance in
response to be real, before
leading me to the bedroom,
See how my hand doesn't
leave yours in my tight hold,
so you might feel my intent to
go always with you.
Leave egotistical thoughts
behind,
Take me by the hand,
pull me close as my
eyes meet yours, so
I might see what you
see is true,
Kiss me softly, so I might
show my acceptance in
response to be real, before
leading me to the bedroom,
See how my hand doesn't
leave yours in my tight hold,
so you might feel my intent to
go always with you.
Published 23rd Oct 2018
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
23rd Oct 2018 12:07pm
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23rd Oct 2018 8:27pm
23rd Oct 2018 6:51pm
23rd Oct 2018 8:29pm
23rd Oct 2018 8:13pm
See how my hand doesn't
leave yours in my tight hold,
so you might feel my intent to
go always with you.
I said this to my love this morning. Well not as beautifully as you stated it but the exact sentiment! May I keep this one?
leave yours in my tight hold,
so you might feel my intent to
go always with you.
I said this to my love this morning. Well not as beautifully as you stated it but the exact sentiment! May I keep this one?
23rd Oct 2018 8:29pm
24th Oct 2018 2:21pm
24th Oct 2018 7:56pm
Indeed a storm of creativity
When one knows ones dark clouds and how to be of its potential to shine
When one knows ones dark clouds and how to be of its potential to shine
