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demoness
here I come with the ferocity I conceal
dirty, dirty communications
this is some down south black magic
you will feel this in your balls
a low-frequency buzz just for you
yes you motherfucker
I can hear you in my mind
who does this bitch think she's fooling?
I know this she-demon
who goes on the hunt with words
so here I am slinging
watch me do some demonic acrobatics
tease you, then please you
lips to tip suck you off
then walk out
fuck you in the no-tell motel
your cum dripping from my lips
as I titillate another
cunt splayed playing with myself
as I write you
bitch of the night won't stay quiet for long
I will own this
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Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 7:43pm
Well. that's pretty vocal. The first two lines of the last stanza were extremely galling.
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21st Oct 2018 7:49pm
I guess it could seem galling if you read it a certain way... when I say I will own this I mean these feelings of weakness...
thank you beautiful Nari for reading...
love Brenda 🌹
thank you beautiful Nari for reading...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 7:52pm
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21st Oct 2018 7:53pm
Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 8:20pm
You haven't lost your raw edge...wouldn't want to mess with you.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 11:06pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun most graciously... I'm no one really just a lady frightened by her own weaknesses...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 10:18pm
A fierce and enthralling write, Brenda. You do the "demonic acrobatics" like none other, even more dramatic in contrast to the vulnerability you still put across. I love your work, demoness or angel, or both.
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Re: Re. demoness
21st Oct 2018 11:07pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow you warm my heart with the love you show me...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
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21st Oct 2018 11:41pm
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Re: Re. demoness
23rd Oct 2018 2:10pm
Re. demoness
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2018 2:24am
Crimmy,
You are fierce, young lady!!
But sweet, and beautiful, too.
In conclusion, you're fantastic, and you amaze me.
Stay strong.
Love,
Matthew.
You are fierce, young lady!!
But sweet, and beautiful, too.
In conclusion, you're fantastic, and you amaze me.
Stay strong.
Love,
Matthew.
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23rd Oct 2018 2:11pm
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 3:58pm
Thanks...you don't have a fire extinguisher by any chance, do you?
lol.
Love,
Matthew.
lol.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. demoness
22nd Oct 2018 3:16am
you've turned this in an art
the way you used words on this one is amazing....
pOt
the way you used words on this one is amazing....
pOt
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23rd Oct 2018 2:11pm
Re. demoness
22nd Oct 2018 4:49am
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23rd Oct 2018 2:12pm
Re. demoness
22nd Oct 2018 5:19am
Great stuff, a take charge kind of girl, way to go. I liked the flow of the writing it made the feeling of the poem jump of the page. Will now go read more of your stuff.
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Re: Re. demoness
23rd Oct 2018 2:13pm
Re. demoness
22nd Oct 2018 6:06am
good stuff Brenda...a pleasure to inhale the intoxicating atmosphere you create...
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Re: Re. demoness
23rd Oct 2018 2:13pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for showing love on this write...
love Brenda 😈
love Brenda 😈
Re. demoness
BAM! A punch in the face. Truly enjoyed, Lady Crim!
Punch I meant. Not lunch... Lol
Punch I meant. Not lunch... Lol
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23rd Oct 2018 2:14pm
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23rd Oct 2018 2:15pm
Re. demoness
24th Oct 2018 2:24pm
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1st Nov 2018 10:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
1st Nov 2018 10:41pm
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Re: Re. demoness
1st Nov 2018 10:47pm
Re. demoness
8th Nov 2018 3:47pm
you’re really talented! been reading your poems for a while now & you gave me the inpspiration to post some of my own on here!
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Re: Re. demoness
8th Nov 2018 6:07pm
thank you graciously and welcome to DU I look forward to reading you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤