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Nothing But Words
Sometimes words just aren't enough
to capture all of the magic that surrounds
the spill of the rainbow after a good storm
the twinkles that resound from a caring eye
the lick of the lips before that first kiss
resplendent, sumptuous, beheld
my mind wanders the forest that is me
searching for what now remains
the faults and the fissures
the fallen, and the free
the leaves fall one by one
opulent amber hues abound
ne'er is there a sound
no words but the beauty still exists
there's a rustle in the air
the bark begins to bleed
will the words spill out and breathe
I hesitate,
a chestnut gallops by
smiles and winks her eye
the words now come
flowing with matchless grace
stunning, wondrous, sweet
adorning a remarkable face
to capture all of the magic that surrounds
the spill of the rainbow after a good storm
the twinkles that resound from a caring eye
the lick of the lips before that first kiss
resplendent, sumptuous, beheld
my mind wanders the forest that is me
searching for what now remains
the faults and the fissures
the fallen, and the free
the leaves fall one by one
opulent amber hues abound
ne'er is there a sound
no words but the beauty still exists
there's a rustle in the air
the bark begins to bleed
will the words spill out and breathe
I hesitate,
a chestnut gallops by
smiles and winks her eye
the words now come
flowing with matchless grace
stunning, wondrous, sweet
adorning a remarkable face
Written by
JusTim_
Published 17th Oct 2018
| Edited 18th Oct 2018
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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
17th Oct 2018 10:40pm
Sometimes we say beautiful and we mean way more than that but there are just no words..thanks J
Re. Nothing But Words
Anonymous
17th Oct 2018 10:35pm
You the man, Tim!
Very nice writing!
(You're trying to make me look bad, aren't you? I can do that easily enough with my own writing!) lol.
Nice write!
MZ.
Very nice writing!
(You're trying to make me look bad, aren't you? I can do that easily enough with my own writing!) lol.
Nice write!
MZ.

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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
17th Oct 2018 10:42pm
Re. Nothing But Words
Anonymous
18th Oct 2018 00:57am
And yet you proved right here that words are definitely enough to evoke emotion and spark imagination. Beautiful, truly

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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 1:03am
Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 1:34am
I second willow on this one . Wonderful poem Tim . Conveying beauty through language that is seemingly enexpressable . One of my favourites of yours so far .
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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 1:37am
Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 7:03pm
I'm getting Robert Frost vibes. oh the things that poets can do with words! :)
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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 8:35pm
Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 9:19pm
the words now come
flowing with matchless grace
These lines sum up my feelings for this. Graceful writing indeed.
flowing with matchless grace
These lines sum up my feelings for this. Graceful writing indeed.
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Re: Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 9:38pm
Re. Nothing But Words
18th Oct 2018 9:38pm
"resplendent" ... "sumptuous" ... "fissures" ... beautiful flowing "s"s ... wonderful write JT ...
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Re. Nothing But Words
Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 12:40pm
Really awesome ink my friend

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