deepundergroundpoetry.com
Broken
Crumpled on the grass
on spreading magenta
Looking up at the stars
wishing someone can hear
her soft whispers
for caring hands
Tears falling from her eyes
As the stars seems to glow
Brighter by the hour
but nearer is darkness
the scythed persona
he draws near
Darkness on darkness
she falls
as the reaper reaps
morning sees
the raped, crumpled
like yesterday's newspaper
on spreading magenta
Looking up at the stars
wishing someone can hear
her soft whispers
for caring hands
Tears falling from her eyes
As the stars seems to glow
Brighter by the hour
but nearer is darkness
the scythed persona
he draws near
Darkness on darkness
she falls
as the reaper reaps
morning sees
the raped, crumpled
like yesterday's newspaper
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 1
comments 12
reads 1379
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
This poem...
3rd Nov 2011 9:57pm
is actually an entry to a competition within this portal, but I wish to share it here. Thank You for reading.
Beautiful darkness....
3rd Nov 2011 10:22pm
i Love da pic u depict here....it givs hope even at da worst of times....keep doin ur thing....
0
re: Beautiful darkness....
3rd Nov 2011 10:35pm
Thank you Goodest. I did not think it was that good, but the vision of the Grim Reaper seems not to go away at that time. Imagine...God, Goodest! it was scary.
re: re: Beautiful darkness....
3rd Nov 2011 10:40pm
re: re: re: Beautiful darkness....
3rd Nov 2011 10:45pm
I wish...but then not all wishes are granted. Let me keep that close to my chest. Thank you Goodest. Its true though, as long as one has faith.
re: re: re: re: Beautiful darkness....
3rd Nov 2011 10:55pm
re: re: re: re: re: Beautiful darkness....
4th Nov 2011 00:08am
Thanks again...you would be shocked at what I pray for and maybe you won't be...
re: re: re: re: re: re: Beautiful darkness....
4th Nov 2011 00:14am
i dont think i wud b so surprised....most times we Pray 4 our own benefit.....
0
Gifted!!!
3rd Nov 2011 10:46pm
You are a very gifted writer who paints pictures with words..brilliant write! peace Crim :)
0
re: Gifted!!!
3rd Nov 2011 10:51pm
...
Anonymous
4th Nov 2011 4:11am
I visualized what you painted with your words and became sad for her, for all such victims of circumstance and cruelty. A great job you have done in evoking emotion with this piece, Grace.
0
re: ...
Sad isn't it? When I wrote it, I actually got goosebumps. The Grim reaper almost felt real. It was quite scary. Thanks Shaman for commenting.