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Last minute escape
Decisions made
Chest tightening
thoughts and feelings
Unbearable unrest sceams
Not crossroads but a dead end
Last chance to turn around
before the option is off the table
A sacrifice needs to be made
She leaves behind something precious
Every choice comes with a price
There is no price too high for freedom
she says as she turns on her heels
and runs towards the future
to escape once more
because nothing
is written
Chest tightening
thoughts and feelings
Unbearable unrest sceams
Not crossroads but a dead end
Last chance to turn around
before the option is off the table
A sacrifice needs to be made
She leaves behind something precious
Every choice comes with a price
There is no price too high for freedom
she says as she turns on her heels
and runs towards the future
to escape once more
because nothing
is written
Published 16th Oct 2018
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16th Oct 2018 10:40pm
17th Oct 2018 2:02am
Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 10:54pm
Hi Angel,
Wonderful writing!!
I think the decision could be a couple of different things(due to your wonderfully elusive writing), but I hope it's the right choice.
Awesome, my friend!
Matthew.
Wonderful writing!!
I think the decision could be a couple of different things(due to your wonderfully elusive writing), but I hope it's the right choice.
Awesome, my friend!
Matthew.
17th Oct 2018 2:04am
I like to keep it elusive sometimes...it leaves plenty of space for the reader to relate through different scenarios. Thanks Matthew.
16th Oct 2018 11:03pm
17th Oct 2018 2:05am
I think it interesting that you find it whimsickal. Different eyes see different things....cool.
17th Oct 2018 12:29pm
When in doubt turn about.
~ My Father
Sounds like she listened to her instincts. There is indeed a price for freedom; however, it's never too high.
~ My Father
Sounds like she listened to her instincts. There is indeed a price for freedom; however, it's never too high.
17th Oct 2018 4:14pm
Sometimes it's a case of "feel the fear and do it anyway" - looks like it's maybe one of those times.
"because nothing
is written"
... therein lies the chance for something better.
Viel Glück.
Josh
"because nothing
is written"
... therein lies the chance for something better.
Viel Glück.
Josh
17th Oct 2018 11:03pm
Thank you Josh. I've been here before. Usually it works out somehow. Sometimes there is no choice but to make the choice....and...not all is lost.
31st Oct 2018 11:07pm
"Not crossroads but a dead end" ... like this line ... "because nothing/is written" ... get closing lines ...
