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Blue
The sea is blue
and I am too
fuck you
and I am too
fuck you
Published 14th Oct 2018
Author's Note
I am not even awake....just playing with words over my first coffee....; )
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14th Oct 2018 3:34pm
14th Oct 2018 3:37pm
Hahaha, my husband was making a joke and then I added some and this emerged.
Who ever can relate might take it.
Thanks LilD.
Who ever can relate might take it.
Thanks LilD.
14th Oct 2018 3:36pm
14th Oct 2018 3:39pm
14th Oct 2018 6:25pm
Sounds like how I feel when I roll out of bed and get on my rowing-machine each morning and speak to her {the machine I mean - we have this love-hate relationship :) }.
15th Oct 2018 2:22am
Anonymous
14th Oct 2018 6:45pm
Very nice, Angel!
I think it captures the resonating themes of loneliness, sorrow, and 'screw you, you idiot!', very adeptly.
Deep writing my love.
Lol.
Matthew.
I think it captures the resonating themes of loneliness, sorrow, and 'screw you, you idiot!', very adeptly.
Deep writing my love.
Lol.
Matthew.
15th Oct 2018 2:26am
Anonymous
15th Oct 2018 7:15am
Just playing around, Kiddo.
You're fu.
Matthew!
You're fu.
Matthew!
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
13th Nov 2018 00:25am
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