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Simple Friendliness
I please him with a simple friendliness:
Smiling at him and holding out my hand;
My hair is quite arranged and my white dress
Is perfumed with fresh scent; I feel quite grand
Until he bids me kneel and leans to kiss
My forehead, then unzips me at the back;
And tells me that it would be quite remiss
Not to respond in kind - a little slap
Encourages my actions; as I slide
My fingers to his trousers and he grips
My dark hair, with a vengeance, to deride
The coiffure and that presence; each soon slips
As my mouth takes his cock; and I regress
To please him with my simple friendliness.
Smiling at him and holding out my hand;
My hair is quite arranged and my white dress
Is perfumed with fresh scent; I feel quite grand
Until he bids me kneel and leans to kiss
My forehead, then unzips me at the back;
And tells me that it would be quite remiss
Not to respond in kind - a little slap
Encourages my actions; as I slide
My fingers to his trousers and he grips
My dark hair, with a vengeance, to deride
The coiffure and that presence; each soon slips
As my mouth takes his cock; and I regress
To please him with my simple friendliness.
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Re. Simple Friendliness
15th Oct 2018 7:04pm
Can you be subtle and daring in the same piece. Kinda the good girl next door that no one knows is really bad. Nice
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16th Oct 2018 12:33pm
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16th Oct 2018 12:34pm
Re. Simple Friendliness
a friend on knees is a friend in deed...wonderfully stimulating as is your wont...:)
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Re. Simple Friendliness
15th Oct 2018 8:35pm
Who doesn't like friendly. Nice erotic piece. The giving of friendly and innocence.
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16th Oct 2018 12:42pm
It is a very fine balance for taking the teasing too far can lead to unfortunate consequences.
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Re. Simple Friendliness
16th Oct 2018 11:21am
That is one hell of a greeting. Favourite line: "The coiffure and that presence; each soon slips".
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16th Oct 2018 12:32pm
Re. Simple Friendliness
18th Oct 2018 10:29pm
As always I love your style. It's compact, well worded and extremely erotic. Simply sublime!
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19th Oct 2018 1:09pm
Re. Simple Friendliness
19th Oct 2018 3:31pm
Elusive and direct at the same time. Escapist yet capturing; it's amazing how just 1 or two words can override the factory default settings on a piece.
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Re. Simple Friendliness
23rd Oct 2018 3:21am
Oh, I love this! I have come to love the simple smile of a woman and handshake. There is something thrilling about the innocent flirtation. Even if it doesn't lead to sex it is exhilarating. Your poem took me into the heart of female kindness and its ultimate fruition.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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