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Luminous Days
The darkness has finally passed, and the sun is rising
The journey is a struggle, but I’m still climbing
I long to see the light and feel the warmth on my face
The sunlight twinkles as I’m caught in its embrace.
I’ve finally found the luminous days
Emotions fill me and I’m in awe
That tiny ray of light helped me find my way
This unbridled joy I feel is completely raw.
Whether it’s day or night, there’s always light
Spending my days here feels absolutely right
I don’t know if I even deserve this
Yet the sun reassures with its delicate kiss.
The luminous days have finally come
And I hope they’re here to stay
I like this new being that I’ve become
I’ll journey through life day by day.
The journey is a struggle, but I’m still climbing
I long to see the light and feel the warmth on my face
The sunlight twinkles as I’m caught in its embrace.
I’ve finally found the luminous days
Emotions fill me and I’m in awe
That tiny ray of light helped me find my way
This unbridled joy I feel is completely raw.
Whether it’s day or night, there’s always light
Spending my days here feels absolutely right
I don’t know if I even deserve this
Yet the sun reassures with its delicate kiss.
The luminous days have finally come
And I hope they’re here to stay
I like this new being that I’ve become
I’ll journey through life day by day.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 14th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Another poem inspired by Ivan Torrent's track of the same title. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYUAQH6z8Nw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYUAQH6z8Nw
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Re. Luminous Days
14th Oct 2018 8:10pm
well rhymed effulgence of newborn consciousness...a very smooth and delight full visioning...XLNT S...
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14th Oct 2018 8:53pm
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14th Oct 2018 9:21pm
Re. Luminous Days
14th Oct 2018 9:37pm
"That tiny ray of light helped me find my way" ...
... is often all we have - and it seems so fragile - but it's always there, somewhere, and it's a lot stronger than it looks.
... is often all we have - and it seems so fragile - but it's always there, somewhere, and it's a lot stronger than it looks.
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Re: Re. Luminous Days
14th Oct 2018 10:14pm
Indeed, often times it's all we have, and it's completely fragile. Thanks for your comment, Josh.
Re. Luminous Days
15th Oct 2018 3:28am
I'm with Lawrence, your rhyming was impeccable! Great job Luna, great writing shows when we are at our happiest or our worst. It appears happiness is your force and I'm so grateful for you to have that!!
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Re: Re. Luminous Days
15th Oct 2018 3:32am
Hope for better days is the only thing that keeps me going. Thanks for your comment, Pandora, and for adding my poem to your reading list. I'm glad you like it.
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15th Oct 2018 3:34am
I hold onto that very hope although a slippery slope. Keep holding on!
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Re. Luminous Days
15th Oct 2018 5:15am
That's all any of us do is take it day by day. You remind of one of those love children I had back in the day lol
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15th Oct 2018 7:51pm
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22nd Nov 2018 4:50am
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22nd Nov 2018 1:35pm
Thank you for you comment. It's good to see another Ivan Torrent fan here.