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Model Citizen
Awake now
but wishing I could stay cocooned
in random dreams
and strange bits of dialogue
One more day
to be Pavlov's dog
- a disciple to the alarm
earning 13% for my government.
but wishing I could stay cocooned
in random dreams
and strange bits of dialogue
One more day
to be Pavlov's dog
- a disciple to the alarm
earning 13% for my government.
Published 11th Oct 2018
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- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
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13th Oct 2018 5:18pm
"cocooned" ... wonderful word ... "a disciple to the alarm" ... then the cold transactional closing line ... engaging ...
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